Rain And Heart

Feel the Pearls on You!!

It might be some pleasure,
or
it might be some pain.
Still you are wide open,
Wide open in rain.

You are dressed like a naked eye
and your tears,
welcomes you...but you cant cry.

It might be some pleasure or pain
still you are wide open in the rain.

The falling rain finds you asleep
and in your broken heart,
The darkness runs deep.

Itmight be some pleasure
or it might be some pain,
Still you are wide open.
Wide open in rain.

Reviews

[Neon]

It might be some pleasure or pain
still you are wide open in the rain... coolio lines.

I enjoyed the piece once again, keep writing on. Those who're in love of someone, love writing on such kinda pieces where the rain and pain walk together hand in hand ... This piece's well written from yer cool heart and I should say it's a cool poem because the flow of yer cool rhythm made the piece cool to read... nice work again, keep on.

[Nims FallingDewdrops]

Thanks.... ^_^