It's written all over

Just a little something I wrote just now :) Enjoy!

A game was played, A game for you.

Hope you feel you played well.

As we laughed over your pity. 

Seeing how long it took you,

and now we talk.

Talk about how he's kill you if he sees you.

Nice to have someone to go with,

to feel,

to love for real.

If you ever loved somebody put your hands up,

If you love someone now keep them down.

And I keep them down to smile.

It's funny how you thought, believed, cared?

It's funny how we've been behind your back.

It's funny how you lie.

It's funny how you don't know how many who hate you now.

So it's written in the stars, in the oceans, in the sun.

It's written all over your face that you don't know anything.

It's written in the books, the magazines, it's written all over.

A million miles away we know, a million miles away it's obvious.

It's so obvious what you think, and  it's obvious I don't care.

Now I got what I wanted, and again, funny how you act up.

It's funny how you never knew.

It's written all over your face.

Reviews

[HavenJaede]

New to the community! Good to see such great word-smithing.

[Coyote Poetry]

"So it's written in the stars, in the oceans, in the sun.
It's written all over your face that you don't know anything.
It's written in the books, the magazines, it's written all over."
I like the set-up and the strength in this poem. It is funny how some people believe no-one know their real goals and desires. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Namelezz]

A risen heroine, a little something back at you for claiming me to be cheating and calling me a b***h. This is not a poem telling that I was cheating, it was how we always knew that he and I would end up together as soon as I got rid of that f****r. You see I never actually loved him. He was just there. I have never cheated, he had. He's such a liar as you also know and no matter what he says you'll always know that he has been lying to everyone. So you know what? I think it's pitiful of you to say that to me. Mind your own business, okay?
-Sarah Pedersen

[A Risen Heroine.]

Du ved godt hvor stor en sæk du er for det der?
At være utro er det værste nogensinde, du burde skamme dig.

~A Risen Heroine~

[Becky Clancy]

I really enjoyed the different fonts that you did, that made the poem fun, I like it (:

[Alex Vidmar]

wow. this is great. well done. I love it. :)

Keep me posted!

~Alex