to My True love

 dear holder of my heart, 

     Today you questioned my love.as If what others think matters. I don't care for them I care for you.

and they need to know the color of your skin,the type of hair you have, your gender none of it matters to me. all that matters is your kindness and the smile on your face dally. 

yet... 

     Today you questioned my love.as if someone told you i don't love you. don't listen to them they want to crush any happiness for others. and they need to know...wait no you need to  know. you are my true love I love every thing about you.I'd do anything just to see that smile on your face daily.  

love, 

R. Visini  

From: Raven Visini 

To:My true love 

Reviews

[kk]

You have the right idea. This is very deep and it I connect with it. However, it needs more descriptive words, similes and metaphors. Also, the first letter of a sentence is always capitalized and there is a space between sentences.