Rise and Fall

RISE AND FALL

Tripping, trembling but not falling,

Faltering all the way but not stopping

Wishing it would end someday 

I get along with my life's rise and fall.

Fighting back my thoughts,

Letting them not consume me up 

Hoping one day I will be strong 

I get along with my life's rise and fall.

Stumbling for words but I am not silent,

Not letting my words fade off,

Believing that my words never leave me 

I get along with my life's rise and fall.

Believing I can get along,

I remember the wise words,

I let the sadness affect me to emerge strong,

That's how I toss up amidst the life's rise and fall. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is up and down. We will learn. Get-up and be stronger. I felt the struggle leading to the open ending. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading, it really means a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Najam.

[Onlyme]

A great poem filled with positivity and a great message within it. Nice use of repetition that carries it along nicely.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Hasan669]

I like the positive message within this poem. Some very positive thinking here. The use of repetition in the last line of the stanzas seems to add strength to the poem. Great work, Saher.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much, it means a lot.

[Suhd]

A very nice poem, Saher. All about believing in your strength and not giving up. I agree life consists of many rises and many falls but one has to be strong in bad times. Bravo

[Najam Us Saher]

That's right one must be. Thank you very much for reading.

[Suhd]

pleasure!!!

[wordman]

i guess we all have up`s and downs,it`s how we handle them that matters

[Najam Us Saher]

Absolutely correct. Thank you so much.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, that's how it goes. I like to think of life as taking one step at a time and believing that it will end anyway some day. Such a hope emanating write and nicely written.

[Najam Us Saher]

My bad, will just correct.
Thank you very much for reading :)

[Anjali]

oh.. you are strong. I loved this poem.. and the repetition of the rise and fall line gave this poem even more volume. The concept and theme is great and it is the truth.. problems come and they make us stronger than ever. I really liked this... keep writing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes, that's right. Thank you very much.

[Anjali]

You're welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Beautiful poem saher, i enjoyed every line written

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

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अपना टाइम आयेगा! 😉
This is a beautiful inspiring poem by you dear Najam....You're not only making yourself strong but many readers along with you.....Be blessed =)

[Najam Us Saher]

Haha :D
I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much :)

[Abraham George]

Nice work
This is the same thing i was telling you many times in our chat.
Problems will test your strength. Face it and be strong.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. Thank you very much.