Misty Morning

MISTY MORNING

Now that the lilac buds are in full bloom

And the dried earth is fertile

The lush greenery is regained 

With birds soaring up high 

The dew diffuses this day 

Even the air feels the joy

Melody rings everywhere

When the birds chirp peeping from the leaves

Peace, in my heart resides

To feel the aroma of the earth and sky

The stems smell heavenly 

Fragrance of flower they bear

The raindrops are elixir 

A blessing in disguise

They touch my skin 

And my soul is rejoiced. 

Reviews

[Flowers of Eternity]

I truly love this poem!
So full of imagery and i really felt peace and harmony as I read your poem!
Beautifuly written!
Good job!

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for reading.
I am really happy that it made you feel relaxing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like this. The imagery here is rather appealing (even to a person who isn't too fond of rain lol)
I like the comparison of raindrops to elixir, that's new to me and lovely. From what I've read of you, I think you're quite good in the nature poems :)
Nicely penned, Najam. (:

[Najam Us Saher]

What a lovely coincidence of you reading my poem while I was reading yours too :)
Thank you very much for such kind words and appreciation, I am very happy that you liked this.
Yes, nature poems always appeal to me.
Thank you so much.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Interesting how these coincidences happen :) You're welcome. A pleasure reading you always (:

[Mavericks]

Umda poem najam jee. Nature ke liye best tribute. Mist and mountains have always captured this poets heart. A very refreshing piece. Keep up the good work!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for your kind words. I truly appreciate it a lot.

[barleygirl]

The best part of your poem is how you appeal to all the senses as you describe things (smell, taste, sounds). Your message conveys joyful feelings from within as much as sparkling observations from all around & nature. I love the way your descriptions show interacting with one's surroundings, which makes the scene come alive (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Najam Us Saher]

Believe me, when I started weaving words for this poem I remembered your words about a poem to 'show instead of tell' and I awaited for your review.
I am very happy that you liked it. Thank you very much, I truly appreciate it.

[barleygirl]

I'm honored *smile*

[Neville]

misty mornings are such a delight to behold, and what better introduction to a brand new day than to be privy to such a slow unfolding... and here, you have captured so well the very essence of it happening... Neville

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading this poem and appreciating in a way that really makes me very happy.

[Neville]

Then we are both happy ...

[Ardra]

The ending is beautiful dear one.... rain does wash away the pain the soul feels....and it's pure bliss to enjoy that feeling....
I Enjoyed reading this one

[Najam Us Saher]

I am very happy that you did. Thank you very much.

[Abraham George]

This is the Best, But not your best. Because you are so talented. My little sister keeping me proud.

The words used are so good and the way to detailed are amazing.

Thanks for sharing

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading :)

[Amada]

I don't know how to review it. The way you describe nature, your selection of words are amazing.
And ya another thanks, I've learned 3 new words. 😊😊😊

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy to know that. Thank you very much.

[Amada]

Welcome ji

[angel]

Even the air feels the joy--very nice. Peace, in my heart resides. Those are my favorite lines here. Lovely poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you from bottom of my heart. It means so much to me.

[Onlyme]

The glorious uplifting of dawn and everything waking up from nature and life. Heavenly bliss was felt on reading this exceptional charming poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words are delight. It made me happy. Thank you very much, it made my day.