Our Hearts
A Poem by
Najam Us Saher
It is our heart that defines our soul and character
OUR HEARTS
Our hearts are greedy,
They always desire for more
And more of love too.
Our hearts are faithful,
To those who love sincerely
And remain loyal.
Our hearts are restless,
They do not remain at peace
For they stay awake.
Our hearts are heartless,
They do not stop troubling all
Those who are in love.
Our hearts are sinful,
They attract all the vice deeds,
Bringing wickedness.
Our hearts are two pronged.
It is how we choose to be
Either good or bad.
© 2018 Najam Us Saher
Author's Note
Each stanza is a senryu
Reviews
You have described all kinds of heart.
Can you add about strong and weak hearts?
Nicely written
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I will try to include, thank you very much for suggestion and reading.
6 Years Ago
You are welcome 😊😊😊
Human heart is so complicated. Is this all done by our heart or our mind? I'm still confused whether i am writing this from my heart or mind.
But this is sure i'm writing from my heart- Beautiful definition of heart and the concept of haiku is good. You are an expert in creating haiku es.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Human heart is so complicated. Is this all done by our heart or our mind? I'm still confused whether i am writing this from my heart or mind.
But this is sure i'm writing from my heart- Beautiful definition of heart and the concept of haiku is good. You are an expert in creating haiku es.
6 Years Ago
Your question is thought provoking.
Thank you very much :)
6 Years Ago
My heart is not pumping blood
6 Years Ago
Don't be silly, you would not be alive then 😄
6 Years Ago
My heart is pumping love towards my little sister.
6 Years Ago
I guessed your answer.
6 Years Ago
hihi. You understand me i know.
That is what we call the human heart, it always wants more but we must take care of it and watch over it because the heart wants what is bad or good. We must never let the heart take the lead. If we do it will forever bleed.
Posted 6 Years Ago
That is what we call the human heart, it always wants more but we must take care of it and watch over it because the heart wants what is bad or good. We must never let the heart take the lead. If we do it will forever bleed.
6 Years Ago
You summarised my poem. Thank you very much :)
happy labor day,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Posted 6 Years Ago
happy labor day,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
6 Years Ago
In India it is on every 1 May.
Enjoy your day, happy labor day :)
the whole world is full of greed,power,money,love and some want all
Posted 6 Years Ago
the whole world is full of greed,power,money,love and some want all
6 Years Ago
True, only few want the hearts to be pure and filled with love. Thank you very much for your thought.. read more True, only few want the hearts to be pure and filled with love. Thank you very much for your thoughts.
6 Years Ago
In the present world nobody is chasing Love. Everyone is behind money and fame
6 Years Ago
That is very sad and true.
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Najam Us Saher India
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Published a poetry book titled 'Uncage The Mysterious Soul'
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