Frame me in your heart

Frame me like an art, capture me in your heart.

FRAME ME IN YOUR HEART 

For if I could be the colour on your canvas,

I would never be a soul so colourless.

Brush me like the indigo hues of a dark sky,

Or like the free birds soaring high. 

Just as the shades of pink you colour,

A thousand strokes of perfection to the water.

Strike me along like the reflection,

Or like the setting sun in the horizon. 

Along the seas you create the mountains,

Darkest brown brush of the colour makes a chain.

Create me too like a picture of a tale,

Or like the boat that alone sails.

Paint me like a picture in your heart,

Discover my admiration for you like an art.

Remember me like the shades of your colour,

Or like a secret admirer yet to discover. 

                

                                            16- August-18

Author's Note

The painting was done by a thirteen year old who happens to be the sister of my best friend. This art inspired me to write this poem for her. It could not be possible without her.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i love this
i really do
love the painting done by a 13 year old beautiful tell the artist i said so too please.
i love the poem its brilliant.
i wrote a poem about a boat picture my ex husband (now live out partner ) painted.
its weird a year later that picture that i chose randomly from his amateur collection he put in an art show and one first prize. it was like i chose his award winning picture a year before it happened to write a poem about tell her/him to keep painting. what a wonderful tribute to her. thanks for sharing this. i liked it a lot loved it really

[Najam Us Saher]

Yesterday I saw your contest and this poem clicked my mind so I submitted it :)
I understand why this poem was very much liked by you. I am sure the painting and the poem both are marvellous, I would like to see and read that.
I will surely tell her about your praise and I thank you from bottom of my heart.

[Amada]

Frame me in your wallet plz, my pocket has died 5 days ago.

[Najam Us Saher]

Haha. Thanks.

[Amada]

Sorry its my pocket money

[Abraham George]

You draw that picture with your words. fantastic write.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that you liked it. Thank you very much :)

[Onlyme]

Beautifully expressed, graceful soothing and magical. just like the painting that inspired you.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, I am glad that you found it to be soothing :)

[Onlyme]

Wonderful poem :)

[wordman]

your words painted a lovely image as well,loved the write and the image

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for appreciating both.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[barleygirl]

This is one of the best poems of yours that I've read so far. I love the way you use a ton of imagery from nature with lots of pops for all the senses. Reading along it feels like you're pulling me along a river of natural delights all around. Nicely strong upbeat tone & clever title that's well-used thru-out (((HUGS))) Fondly Margie

[Najam Us Saher]

Your review was awaited. I am very delighted to know that you liked it, I thank you from the depths of my heart for appreciating this one :)

[Sneh]

Wow,, watching such nature stuffed paintings, I feel so peaceful. Much appreciation to the artist and promoter at same time! Thanks for sharing :))
Sneh

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading and appreciating. It means a lot :)

[Neville]

Both poem and painting are indeed works of art.. both beautiful and one can clearly appreciate where you found inspiration..... Neville

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel honoured to hear that, thank you very much.

[Neville]

My words are true & you most certainly deserve them... N