Rain- we meet again

Other than tears, I like raindrops on my face

RAIN-WE MEET AGAIN 

The slant rays pour down from the sky,

They come every season and meet again. 

I remain still the same, 

I cry along the falling rain. 

Aiming at the sky

To see the rain descend.

I am lying at the ground, 

I feel so burdened.

Not a sign of turmoil, 

Everything at peace, 

But what about me? 

When will I receive?

The elixir is enchanting, 

My heart it heals,

It comforts my soul within,

Every bit in me feels dripped.

I breathe in the essence, 

Restlessness fades away. 

Other than my tears, 

I like raindrops on my face.

I look up the sky, 

And open my arms to embrace it. 

It makes me forget my sorrows for some time,

I feel alive to greet it. 

Rain never fails to charm me,

It surrounds me within.

It fills my heart with happiness, 

It is my faithful friend indeed.

The love and joy from it I receive,

The fragrance hold me its captive, 

It arrives to see me suffering, 

To hear my woeful songs,

It is rain who has been with me all along. 

Reviews

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

I can deeply understand this poem, the emotions are deep with pain.I can see the the image of all those tears that are falling among the rain.This poem holds powerful strength that can hold one in captive in the suffering. Thank you for your poem. I do hope you come by my page and read my poems. and you will see how much I do understand.

[Najam Us Saher]

I will surely. Thank you very much for understanding my emotions behind this poem. It means a lot.

[Mavericks]

Beautifully penned, Najam jee. Lucky, you that you are enjoying the first showers this season. Delhi me to monsoon pe bhi siyassat :p Baadal jo garje, woh kabhi nahi baraste rings true here.

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Maybe it will rain soon there too. Thank you very much for reading and appreciating.

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It's raining outside and you gifted this one to read!!!
Absolutely the fragrance of dripping raindrops and the rythm it keeps while touching the ground amazes me.,..thanks for sharing...it's really a good read😊!!

[Abraham George]

For you its raining outside and for me after reading this, i feel its raining inside me. Because here its rare to get a rain- I am working in Gulf.

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Haha...I invite you to visit Bangladesh or India at the monsoon....you'll be surely contented by the soothing rain!☺

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading Tahsin. I am glad I could gift you this. 😊

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You're already mostly heartedly welcomed!😊

[Abraham George]

@Tahsin i am from Kerala . You heard about that place in India. Most raining place. I have seen rain a lot but when working abroad we really miss those days.

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Oh, sorry I didn't knew!!
But yess Banana Wafers and rain will be nice combination on Kerela...then I gotta visit there once😀!

[Abraham George]

Don't say sorry. You are welcomed to give a visit.

[Abraham George]

I forgot to tell you one thing. This poet Najam is my sister whom i found here and i treasure her more than everything.

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I see!😊....my friend too😇

[Abraham George]

Beautifully penned. everyone like rain. some people like to see and some people like to get under the rain.

After reading your poem i remember the character in a Telugu movie Varsham(2004) played by Trisha.

I loved this poem and rain. i like to get wet in rain.

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay. Thank you so much for reading. It means a lot :)

[Abraham George]

I told you that never thank me for what i am doing.

[Abraham George]

These poems are the only thing help me to remember about that beautiful phenomenon.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. Your words make me happy.