Rain- we meet again

Other than tears, I like raindrops on my face

RAIN-WE MEET AGAIN 

The slant rays pour down from the sky,

They come every season and meet again. 

I remain still the same, 

I cry along the falling rain. 

Aiming at the sky

To see the rain descend.

I am lying at the ground, 

I feel so burdened.

Not a sign of turmoil, 

Everything at peace, 

But what about me? 

When will I receive?

The elixir is enchanting, 

My heart it heals,

It comforts my soul within,

Every bit in me feels dripped.

I breathe in the essence, 

Restlessness fades away. 

Other than my tears, 

I like raindrops on my face.

I look up the sky, 

And open my arms to embrace it. 

It makes me forget my sorrows for some time,

I feel alive to greet it. 

Rain never fails to charm me,

It surrounds me within.

It fills my heart with happiness, 

It is my faithful friend indeed.

The love and joy from it I receive,

The fragrance hold me its captive, 

It arrives to see me suffering, 

To hear my woeful songs,

It is rain who has been with me all along. 

Reviews

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

I can deeply understand this poem, the emotions are deep with pain.I can see the the image of all those tears that are falling among the rain.This poem holds powerful strength that can hold one in captive in the suffering. Thank you for your poem. I do hope you come by my page and read my poems. and you will see how much I do understand.

[Najam Us Saher]

I will surely. Thank you very much for understanding my emotions behind this poem. It means a lot.

[sonnie ibadah]

the imagery is beautiful, what a poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much 😀

[Eris Marriott]

I could literally feel the rain pouring down my shoulders as I read this. Wonderful, wonderful imagery and you've really framed what it feels like to be in love with the rain. Lovely work!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am very happy to hear your kind words. Thank you they are appreciated a lot.

[Mikku]

Pluviophile....in real sense...loved the poem..an awesone piece of work

[Najam Us Saher]

Such kind words means a lot. Thank you.

[sette]

and what a vivid description about rain and how it makes one realize a lot of things

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading.

[Crowley]

This was a refreshing as that rain. I too am a lover of the train although we rarely get it where I live and when we do it comes with haboobs and flash flooding...lol. This was a wonderful write!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. I am happy that you could relate :)

[wordman]

rain washes the soul,washes all your mistakes,

[Najam Us Saher]

True. Thank you very much for understanding and appreciating. ☺

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Ace Jaxon]

I loved this poem, and the way you described rain as your friend who has been with you all along. The smell of rain often for me brings happiness to the sorrow I feel when crying in the rain.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that you could relate. Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts.
"Rain never fails to charm me,
It surrounds me within.
It fills my heart with happiness,
It is my faithful friend indeed."
I liked the above lines. Rain can be a blessing or not. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.

Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for reading my poems always and leaving a kind review everytime. It means a lot to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and you are welcome.

[Onlyme]

Beautiful express in finding inner peace and comfort from the heavenly raindrops from above. It Gods way of telling us he cares and loves us.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes indeed. God has his own ways. Thank you so much for reading.

[Onlyme]

Truly Lovely, Najam. :)

[heartspeaks]

Happy monsoon.... I loved the poem. It's really nice.... Gives the feels of rain... Happy to read your work after a long time... Keep it up....

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy to see you after a long time. Thank you very much :D

[heartspeaks]

Pleasure is all mine... Would definitely admit... Missed your writing

[Najam Us Saher]

You made my day 😀