My Daffodil

MY DAFFODIL

You fill my heart with passion of friendship,

Your fragrance I cannot let go.

A bud you are who make my heart skip,

You reside over the hills so low.

Slowly and carefully I climbed up the hills,

I waited restlessly but patiently to greet.

My heart blossomed to see my daffodil,

Where I traveled miles to meet.

Standing upright blooming passionately,

You fill my heart with joy.

You smile, you blush affectionately,

You make my heart rejoice.

The night arrives shivering me in chills,

Still I lie down along, admiring you.

You are angelic beauty my daffodil,

It is very hard to bid you adieu.

Like a fragrance I will stay along,

I will hold our memories close.

I cannot stay; I will be gone,

It is you that my heart chose.

Embosom my friendship that blooms my heart,

Hold me close like your own.

Endeavour our memories since the start,

Don't cry or be sad or mourn. 

Allow my memories to be your petal,

Let them encircle you within.

Allow me to be your pedestal,

So that I let you blossom in spring. 

Let the fragrance of my words linger in your soul,

In your heart let pleasure fill.

Let the essence of our friendship stay as whole,

Always remain a cheery and delightful daffodil. 

2-May-2018.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Najam... That's a very heart felt poem
Beautiful

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.
Your username was Rapunzel isn't it?

[Ardra]

;) keeps changing ...you can calle me
(swee)

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay......

[Anjali]

Wow... I am mesmerized... So beautiful.. so sweet... And feels so angelic! Keep writing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading. It means a lot.

[Anjali]

you're very welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful and hopeful poem Najam.
Let the fragrance of my words linger in your soul,
In your heart let pleasure fill.
Let the essence of our friendship stay as whole,
Always remain a cheery and delightful daffodil."
The above lines perfect. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for appreciating my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[Mikku]

Not mere description of a flower but a kind of emblazoned eternal love... I felt some deep inner meaning to it,don't know whether I interpreted it wrong or right... Nevertheless...an amazing piece

[Najam Us Saher]

You have interpreted correctly, it is about a bond of friendship.
Thank you very much.

[Mikku]

Welcome😊...

[Joey Nizz]

Beautifully written with an amazing word selection, all I can say is, I'm glad that I am your friend to see your true art in words.

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! Thank you so much for such kind words. I am happy too to be your friend. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome ^^

[Zoya]

Beautifully worded and expressed. Wonderful work, Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much 😀

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[Abraham George]

beautifully written and happy to see you happy. If i said anything more about your poem it will be exaggeration.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, I am glad that you liked it.

[wordman]

a beautiful walk in the park feeling the love you feel

[Najam Us Saher]

Friendship really feels that way. Thank you.

[Mavericks]

Very beautiful write, Nazam. Nature is indeed the best therapist. We can learn so much from it. It's always ready to nurture and nourish the whole mankind, but ironically we have always took it for granted. Mercilessly cutting down forests and tress in the name of so called pseudo race of Industrialization. No amount of technology can out compete the moments spent in the lap of mother earth. She is selfless and mankind truest companion. Just like without Ying there could be no Yang. Without nature, humanity can barely thrive. Let's be aware, and spread this message. Peace.

[Najam Us Saher]

It's Najam.
I whole heartedly agree with you. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your views. It means a lot.