My Daffodil

MY DAFFODIL

You fill my heart with passion of friendship,

Your fragrance I cannot let go.

A bud you are who make my heart skip,

You reside over the hills so low.

Slowly and carefully I climbed up the hills,

I waited restlessly but patiently to greet.

My heart blossomed to see my daffodil,

Where I traveled miles to meet.

Standing upright blooming passionately,

You fill my heart with joy.

You smile, you blush affectionately,

You make my heart rejoice.

The night arrives shivering me in chills,

Still I lie down along, admiring you.

You are angelic beauty my daffodil,

It is very hard to bid you adieu.

Like a fragrance I will stay along,

I will hold our memories close.

I cannot stay; I will be gone,

It is you that my heart chose.

Embosom my friendship that blooms my heart,

Hold me close like your own.

Endeavour our memories since the start,

Don't cry or be sad or mourn. 

Allow my memories to be your petal,

Let them encircle you within.

Allow me to be your pedestal,

So that I let you blossom in spring. 

Let the fragrance of my words linger in your soul,

In your heart let pleasure fill.

Let the essence of our friendship stay as whole,

Always remain a cheery and delightful daffodil. 

2-May-2018.

Reviews

[Black Jess]

I... I'm speechless !
You won't believe what I'm gonna say, i can't believe it neither because it's just anormal for all the good coincidences to come all together at once !
What I am about to say is : my name is " Nardjes " which means a flower " narcissus " and it's a daffodil ! *-* Is there any more similarities we share !
while i was reading this master-piece, I felt my heart beating and shivering, I wouldn't believe what i'm reading, I felt as if someone that I've never met wrote something about me ! which is lovely and breath-taking
Thank you for the Joy you spread ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

This is for my bestest friend who admires daffodils.
I am astonished to know that your name means daffodil :)
You just made my day with your wonderful words. May god bless you, have brighter days ahead.

[Black Jess]

Oohh this is very lovely,your friend who a lucky *-* you spoke for her the admiration of daffodil in a magnificent way!
Thank you for your kind words =) I wish you the same.

[Onlyme]

This is so lovely, joyous, uplifting, gloriously beautiful. Makes me want to skip in time to the words and feelings.

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! Thank you so much for such lovely words. 😀

[Onlyme]

Najam. your a little angel on earth. Sharing beauty all around us. Thanks for being you. Dawn.

[Najam Us Saher]

I could not be more happy to hear that. You are so kind. You make others smile and happy you are an angel too.

[Onlyme]

Thanks Najam. No iam just me. But bless you for the nice thoughts. hugs again. Your lovely. Dawn.

[Najam Us Saher]

Same goes with me, I am just myself, happened to meet a kind person :)

[Onlyme]

💐👍♥️😊 Najam.

[VioletSerendipity]

This is so lovely! Nothing but pure, genuine love. Very refreshing. Love this

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such heart touching words.

[Abraham Kureshi]

Well done, you very well expressed your love for daffodil in your own way.

[Najam Us Saher]

In this I call my friend as a daffodil. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. It means a lot.

[Abraham Kureshi]

That is why I said you expressed your love for daffodil (your friend) very well, and you are welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay.......

[Anshuman Aryav]

Nice piece Najam...
Your creations always inspire me...
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me really happy. Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Stella Armour]

Daffodils are so very delicate and lovely, I am not at all surprised that this is what you call your sweetheart...

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed, they are. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work. It means a lot. ☺

[Stella Armour]

you are very welcome

[Jasmijn]

The words you use make this writing very sweet and pure. Nice to read!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind words.

[Chris Shaw]

A lovely joyful read. And daffodils always do that for me, and I can understand the choice of a daffodil to link in with a special friendship.

Chris

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[Avia]

Very lovely write up. I love the way you described flowers and friendship together. very nice ☺

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. It means a lot.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Really nice and sweet saher

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad you liked it.