Golden Fortune

GOLDEN FORTUNE

Lustrous eyes and luminous face

Her eyes reflected greed and mouth watered for more

Rich, so rich her greed made her

Nothing was left on earth that she couldn't own.

Wrapped in silk with gold and crystals

Wealthy she was; wealthier was her greed.

Rubies and emeralds; all precious stones

Served on silver platter to quench her thirst.

Craving for more; greed to acquire

Sinful she became showing off the shiny treasures

Chest of pearls and diamonds

All the treasures she hold so dear.

Drowned in possession, 

Possession took control over her

A woman of disgrace she became

Wealth became her only power.

Hollow heart inside her,

Not of crystal or gold

Desired to be loved immensely

Passionate yet cold. 

Only if she knew,

She needed no materialistic things to be loved,

Then she would be loved by someone

Only if she knew,

To make her soul wealthy in character

Then she would know,

Love is worth more than her wealth.

She lacked everything that her riches couldn't buy,

She had everything but nothing at all

Her greed brought her to a fall

Her silken threads are not worth anymore

Being proud and greedy she deplored.

Her body covered in luxurious jewels

Isn't pretty when her heart is dark,

It was then she realised,

Beauty within conquers all.

Reviews

[anonymous_at]

tbh I really like the way you convey out the message in here and the way you portray that ambitious girl.......once you achieve something, then it becomes an addiction for few people to achieve everything available within their reach... I have seen that with my own eyes.....and I understand how that person then starts neglecting other's feelings....only his and his powers and his feelings are validated according to him.....

[Najam Us Saher]

Exactly, the things you wish to possess starts to take control over you with time. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my works. It means a lot :)

[anonymous_at]

wlcm..... :) and ya i do agree with you....

[Mavericks]

Such a beautiful piece. Every word so true. We live in a Materialistic world and there is no end to our desires. If left unchecked, we become victims of our senses, forgetting that Contentment can only be attained from within our Soul. And, it's not some Rocket Science, we see it everyday, fighting our own demons. Mind working as devils advocate keeping us in delusion. Anyway, nice work! Remind me of that Song Jaded by Aerosmith.

[Najam Us Saher]

I wholeheartedly agree with you, contentment comes from within not from things. Also, happiness from things remain for some time. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your views.

[Avia]

Very nice lesson to take away from this. I enjoyed reading it, It seems like a folk tale to tell children. Good job.

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you very much, I am glad that you liked it :)

[Zoya]

You told a wonderful story, maintaining that poetic touch throughout! This kind of reminds me of the three caskets in 'The merchant of venice'. Of course, beauty lies within. Great read with a great moral!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that my moral, tale was conveyed well in a poem. Felt good to hear that, thank you so much :)

[Zoya]

Very welcome

[Raghib]

This actually reminds me of someone whom I know . Anyways its an awesome poem I may say .
"First comes the blessing of all that you've dreamed
And then comes the curses of diamonds and rings .
When everything you touch turns to Gold,
What will you feel then my beloved ! "

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. What a lovely poem you have written here poet. Thank you very much for such kind words. You made me really happy :)

[Eddie Phillips]

I am very impressed with this poem. I read it a few minutes ago and my computer started acting crazy so I logged back on to ensure I told you how wonderful it made me feel. You make a solid point in your writing and not one line deviates away from stressing the point of cherishing what you have inside of you. Loved every moment of it. Great Job!

[Najam Us Saher]

What a lovely feedback. I thank you from the depths of my heart for taking the time to read this and appreciating my work. It means a lot. Thank you very much :)

[Desiree O'Neal]

This was really good, it made me really think about what I have and how not to be greedy. I loved this a lot.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that I made you think as that's what I wanted my readers to feel. Thank you so much.

[Anjali]

this piece made me remember every precious thing that is present in this world.. and i liked the message you are trying to convey through this poem. i liked the ending... it was beautiful!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am extremely happy to hear that. Thank you very much for reading :)

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Abraham George]

I feel you wrote about someone. Is it that who i'm thinking off?

Anyway beautifully written and the words are flowing .
Thanks for the share.

[Najam Us Saher]

It's entirely fictional. I thank you so much for reading :)