A Pleasant Morning

A PLEASANT MORNING

The nature has awoken;

And so have I

My dreams have broken

And here I lie.

The night has ended giving me a warning,

It invited me to admire this pleasant morning. 

Golden ray of sunshine,

So warm and tender.

Kissed the dew drops and the grass,

Into morning sunrise surrenders.

Flight of colourful butterflies,

So light and enchanting.

Absorbed the aroma of the flowers,

Diffused the scent in this morning.

Chirping of birds,

So melodious and soothing.

It compels me to wake up

To admire this alluring morning.

Sunshine finds its way towards me,

Colourful butterflies touch me,

The birds sings in my ears,

It is nature that I hold dear.

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

It's beautiful in it's own way
It's soothing and fresh just like morning dew.
seems like its coming out Naturally.
Sorry for the delay in reading it.
I skipped writing and reading for a bit so!

but; welldone

[Najam Us Saher]

Even I skipped writing and reading. Seems like we both were gone for a while and are back again
read moreEven I skipped writing and reading. Seems like we both were gone for a while and are back again
Thank you for reading :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahaha. ohhh . chalo atleast now we can rock

[ElizaB]

Hey,

Thank you for entering my competition.

This piece is a fairy tale. I can feel the wings of the butterfly, hear the call of the bird, feel the morning air upon my throat and thankfully, I can wake.
I really enjoyed reading this. You can create for any occasion or prompt it seems :)

Take care, and well done!
ELiza

[Najam Us Saher]

Aw! How kind of you to say that. Thank you very much for choosing such prompts that I find my poetry worthy to submit.

[Anja Berestetska]

So beautiful! And I really feel like I know that feeling!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that my words made you feel. Thank you so much.

[Anja Berestetska]

My pleasure! Keep writing!

[Harley Quinn]

You are very talented. Beautiful choice of words.

[Najam Us Saher]

You made my day. Thank you very much. It means a lot :)

[Harley Quinn]

Your welcome :)

[Zaisha]

Beautiful and wonderful words for nature
I luv that line the colorfull butterflies touch me
Good wrk
Keep sharing

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work. It means a lot.

[pterodactyl]

This is a lovely piece with some beautiful imagery. There is one line that bothered me though, "The night has end giving me a warning". The tense changes so it seems harsh to me. I would suggest instead "The night has ended giving me a warning" or "The night ends giving me a warning".

[Najam Us Saher]

It sounds good. Thank you very much for the correction. I'll just change it :)

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Mornings had never felt more beautiful than this. Very poetic

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot for such a compliment.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Its my pleasure

[Zoya]

Nothing better than a bright and sunny morning! Gives way to a wonderful day. Would be back to read this again tomorrow morning, haha!

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure, what more a poet can wish for than knowing that reader will visit again to read their work. Thank you very much. ☺

[Zoya]

No worries :)

[anonymous_at]

nice work.....quite inspiring and refreshing...... :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! I am happy that you found it refreshing, I am feeling good to hear that, thank you so much :)

[anonymous_at]

wlcm..... :)

[Avia]

I love the way your love for nature shines through your writing. I think it's beautiful.

[Najam Us Saher]

Overwhelmed to hear that. Thank you :)