Thunder

THUNDER

The lightning struck;

Terror spread

All over the city.

The rage of the cloud 

Broken by the thunder storm.

Flashes and cracks of light depicts

A complete broken sky.

 

Reviews

[Zoya]

Cracking poem! Loved it, especially the last line.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading :)

[Zoya]

You're welcome

[lostinthewaves]

I love that this can have so many adaptations in a readers mind, a true hallmark of a great poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad to hear such positive words, thank you very much.

[Priyanshi]

Reading this piece,you know what, am comparing the broken sky with a broken guy.the storms of difficulties hit him. All flashes and cracks of the memories, making him shattered more.and the terror of being alone, chase him so much, that he feels like a broken sky.

[Najam Us Saher]

I really liked your thoughts. This poem can be interpret in many ways and I liked your interpretation. Thank you very much :)

[Priyanshi]

Loads of smile to you,Najam.

[wordman]

i guess when nature speaks we have no choice but to listen

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. Thank you so much.

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering your piece as always :)

I really like this, although is it short it is close to perfectly crafted.

The last line is my favourite.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am widely elated that you found this poem to be extra ordinary, I never thought I would come first. It means a lot, thank you very much from the depths of my heart :)

[Ghania]

"The rage of the cloud
Broken by the thunder storm"


You've used words so beautifully. Loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, I am extremely happy to know that you liked this :D

[Anjali]

Woah! Nice... I love it. You really described the thunder and that season very well with a lot of emotions. Amazing!

[Najam Us Saher]

I thought this was not that good, that is why I didn't send any read requests. I am extremely happy to know that you saw this poem as a fine example. Thank you very much ☺

[Anjali]

Well I was still gonna read this. And I read it and I loved it! This isn't your best piece but it is good! You are very welcome!