Thunder

THUNDER

The lightning struck;

Terror spread

All over the city.

The rage of the cloud 

Broken by the thunder storm.

Flashes and cracks of light depicts

A complete broken sky.

 

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I loved this.......Beautiful and simple!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words . You made the reader believe and see the words written. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that my words made you feel such. Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

It did and you are welcome my friend.

[barleygirl]

Even tho your poem is a vivid description of a weather-related thunderstorm, I found myself also thinking of it as a perfect metaphor to describe the curse of terrorism (especially due to line #2) when it shatters a community. I love watching lightning & waiting for the thunder quickly afterwards (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Najam Us Saher]

I sincerely thank you for reading my poem. It really means a lot to hear such kind words from you :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Nice short poem. Very descriptive. Great.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this.

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A situation described in very limited amount of words but very beautifully. I liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. It means a lot.

[.]

You're very welcome

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That last line reads like an interesting metaphor to me. Guess we all are, complete but broken skies in our own worlds... Nice write. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Absolutely, it can be interpreted in as many ways as possible. Thank you very much :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome. A pleasure reading 😊

[pragya gaur]

Presented well.....Loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well presented..loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.

[Abraham George]

nice way of presentation.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much :)

[Avia]

Short and beautiful. Very nice.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much :)