Undisturbed

Undisturbed

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

UNDISTURBED
Curled up, brittle, faded fallen leaves
Lying peacefully unnoticed on the floor.
The sun rays hit the dusty tree
Rooted upright on a barren land.
Dried soil, thirsty earth
Waiting for the shower of rain.
The first drop meets the ground
Essence of petrichor diffused
Water splashes on the tree
Erasing the dust.
Leaves, drenched in water
Feel refreshed.
Stationary scene back in movement
With the downpour of rain.
Life back in action after a long pause
Like the change in nature
Everything at place after a chase,
Patience is what it takes. 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher


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The earth got what it needed to survive but not all of us get that most awaited drop of life... Nice piece

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You are right. I am glad that you understood what I wanted to convey. Thank you so much.
This is really good, I loved it as always

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I am really overwhelmed to hear this :)
Your views are so specific and i like how you see the world through your eyes. Everyone likes natures and your poem is also good. But i know this is not your best.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

think more and please make it better. i want it to be more better.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I will give it a try.
Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Good. waiting to read it after your editing.
Wao Its really so beautiful how nature replenishes itself and gives back what the Earth deserves

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

True...Thank you so much for reading :)

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Added on December 12, 2017
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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

India



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Published a poetry book titled 'Uncage The Mysterious Soul' Check it out: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07KXKWBV9 https://www.amazon.in/dp/B07KXKWBV9 more..

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