Christmas Haiku

CHRISTMAS HAIKU 

Shiny silver balls

Hung amidst golden ones on 

A huge christmas tree 

Gifts of all sizes 

Lay below the christmas tree 

Beside the fireplace

Children excited 

Happiness spread all over

Wow! it is christmas 

Reviews

[MaximumFlight]

Really sets the mood for Christmas. I love it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you loved it. Thank you so much :)

[.]

Adorable and lovely!
And Merry Christmas in advance! Have a great time :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Same to you, thank you so much for reading :)

[.]

You're welcome :)

[wordman]

you painted a lovely image,i can see it from here

[Najam Us Saher]

I am overwhelmed that my words made you imagine so well. Thank you very much.

[Avia]

A beautiful poem and clear description. It's like I can see the tree and the children. Nice work :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much, I am glad that I could give you that feeling. ☺

[Anjali]

Such a sweet and adorable piece of poetry it is... I loved reading it.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am overwhelmed to hear that, first time I managed to write 3 haikus as a continuous poem. Thank you so much for reading. ☺

[Anjali]

It's a good thing... We all should try new things...😊. You are welcome!

[Abraham George]

Advanced happy Christmas.
lovely poem

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much, I knew it, that you would like this. I wrote this for a contest.

[Mavericks]

Bahut hi sweet poem hai Nazam jee. Woh bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye. Merry Christmas advance me. =)

[Najam Us Saher]

It's Najam.
Bohot bohot shukriya.

[Mavericks]

Yes, Najam. =)