Flawless

FLAWLESS

Even broken things are beautiful to look at,

There is beauty in a face that doesn't smile.

Not everything is meant to be perfect,

Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed. 

Look beyond, look above,

There lives a soul without life,

Tell her, make her believe that she is alive.

Despite all the negativity

And all the fruitless efforts,

She smiles; yet believes that she is no good.

After all that has happened,

Her hope died, but her desire to live remains.

Make her believe, even broken souls are beautiful too.

Her life all messed up, her destiny all tied,

She feels that she has no beauty, 

Because life took away her smile.

Make her believe that a face which doesn't smile is happy too.

She claims she is imperfect, 

She has never done anything right in her life,

Talk to her, make her believe, 

That she is flawless even in her imperfect life. 

Reviews

[Black Jess]

Here I am x) And I'm glad I came ^^
I think as a teenager, everyone passed through this stage of life when we feel imperfect, not beautiful not worthy ... all the "adolescent" problems and " teenage" things, and this is the perfect poem for a teenager to read *-*
I love this sentence " a face which doesn't smile is happy too " and it is absolutely true ! Sometimes a face is smiling but the person isn't happy, just faking smiles...
Another Time, you nailed it !
Thanks for understanding the others and sharing your compassion.

[Najam Us Saher]

I just wrote the same in the comment of your poem's review that we share same feelings and you made me feel such again. I whole heartedly agree with you. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts, I value it.

[Black Jess]

You're very Welcome ^_^
it's amazing to meet people who think like you and share the same feelings as you ! How Lovely ! ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed. Very nice feeling :)

[SZHZIA]

Smile is not sign of happiness and perfection... the perfect person is the one who hides his/her pain, sorrow or imperfection by having smile on face.
Well written poem .. I love ideas penned in the poem. I love the following lines:

"Not everything is meant to be perfect,
Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed.

Look beyond, look above,
There lives a soul without life,
Tell her, make her believe that she is alive.
Despite all the negativity
And all the fruitless efforts,"
Thanks for sharing you thought and ideas in this lovely poem. :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with your words, they sum up my idea :)
Thank you very much.

[SZHZIA]

It was my pleasure and you are welcome... :-)

[Stella Armour]

often broken souls are the most beautiful, beauty lies within for all those who take the time to seek it out.

[Najam Us Saher]

Truly said. Thank you so much for reading this.

[Onlyme]

This is one of sweetest, soul-filled, cherished and humbling, beautifully project heart, mind and soul, spirited. Transferred Into someone else. With such true undeniable love and acceptance and truth.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for such kind words.

[Abraham Kureshi]

Nice job, this piece of writing is flawless in its own way! Great job.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much 😀

[Riddhi]

Wow..This was such a so beautiful poem..Each line touched my heart...This was the best poem that I read today...Noone is perfect and actually the imperfection has its own beauty...
Beautifully written poem..
Good job.
Keep on writing...

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure, I will. Such kind words inspire me a lot. Thank you very much you made my day. ☺

[Riddhi]

You made my day dear by writing a so beautiful poem..

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! I am overwhelmed to hear that :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful words shared and I agree.
"She claims she is imperfect,
She has never done anything right in her life,
Talk to her, make her believe,
That she is flawless even in her imperfect life"
The above lines. We must do to the people we love. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[¿]

Huh...the first stanza!!! It makes a visible way to take flaws as your perfection.
This needs to be in my library😀

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I was sure you would like it, that's why I shared it with you. 😀

[Priyanshi]

your poem fades the sadness away....this is really inspiring..every imperfection is made perfectly... your Words touched me.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words completed my day. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my works, you made me so happy 😀

[Priyanshi]

Now, your words will make my day....hahahha
Have a beautiful day, dear.

[Ardra]

She smiles; yet believes that she is no good.
After all that has happened,
Her hope died, but her desire to live remains. (maybe you can edit this line)

mmm i so understand these words.... like small whisper of my own soul.... felt like that... thanks for sharing this wonderful creating..

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you found it to be relatable. Thank you so much.