Stay

What would you say when you talk to the person you love for the last time?

STAY

In another life,

I will stay,

I am sorry my mum,

I had to go away.

I cannot forget your pleads,

How you begged me to stay with you,

I am helpless,

I cannot be with and without you.

I understand if you cannot forgive me,

I had no other way,

I am not so privileged to hear for the last time

What you have got to say. 

I pray to be with you in heaven,

At least there I want my wish to be fulfilled,

Not in this life but another,

I will stay. 

Please understand the situation,

For which I am gone,

Not in this life but another,

I will stay with you for long.

I am helpless,

I have no other option,

My words have no meaning

without the pain of losing you.

I am sorry my mum,

I am going away,

With you is the only place

Where I cannot stay. 

Forgive me, for I had to go,

Understand my situation,

This is life I feel,

With all serious complications.

My heart is heavy in your love,

Still, I feel empty inside. 

It was with you that I felt above,

Before dying, I have already died. 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

For whatever the reason of leaving, it is clear that there is much love and a heartfelt apology for going. We do not understand the circumstances, but I felt the deep concern here for the decision. From the point of view of a mother, I would be broken hearted, but at least thankful that such a letter was left. To not leave a note would have been cruel.

Chris

[Najam Us Saher]

My parents got divorced so she had to leave. It was hard to accept that.
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts I wholeheartedly agree.

[Chris Shaw]

Your love for your Mother shone through. I could feel it.

[Najam Us Saher]

I just hope when someday I talk to her or meet her, she feels it too.

[Chris Shaw]

She won't forget you or stop loving you.

[Najam Us Saher]

It's a comfort knowing this. I just hope for the best :)
Thank you very much.

[Amada]

What would you say when you talk to the person you love last time - It differs from person to person.
If that person is my friend ganpat - tb to m usse apne 100 ruppe wps maguga.
And if she is my ex - to usse bhi m apne 51 rupee wps maguga jo uski shadi pr mene diye the.

Jokes apart I can feel what have you written in this with amazing rhyming

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with you. It differs from person to person.
Thank you very much for appreciating. It means a lot.

[Amada]

Welcome welcome 😊😊😊

[Gaurav]

Some poems have the ability to convert into a song. Me, being a composer, know that your words here represent the lyrics. And so simple yet strong it is. Compelling one :)

[Najam Us Saher]

While writing this I felt too that this reads like a song. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your views.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poor decisions stay with us forever.
"My heart is heavy in your love,
Still, I feel empty inside.
It was with you that I felt above,
Before dying, I have already died."
I did like the above lines. The words, honest and true. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading and appreciating my poems, it means a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Khazima Zainab]

Wow I loved it.. literally great ,you know I'm learning from your writings.

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel honoured to hear that. Thank you so much from depths of my heart.

[heartspeaks]

wowaahhhhh!!!! read a deep one after very long... I am super happy to read this.... well done girl... keep writing dear.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am happy that you liked this. 😀

[Muneeb khan]

This poem is what you call one's career defining work.Really loved it.Keep it up

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Priyanshi]

The poem is so touching, Najam....I always love your poem. I don't have anything to say.I really loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

You have my greatest gratitude. I mean it.

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[.]

I have nothing to say :) just one thing

It is related somehow. Maybe inversely haha

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much 😀

[.]

You're welcome :)

[Anjali]

Woah! You always blow my mind away, like I don't know how you do that. It's so beautiful. I loved it so much!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Aah! You have my greatest gratitude. Thank you so much dear. Overwhelmed to read your heart touching reviews.

[Anjali]

You're welcome....😊😊😊😊