Unvoiced screams

UNVOICED SCREAMS

In the darkest of hour,

 I lay awake.

Flashing memories and thoughts meet me,

They whisper melodious songs of heartbreak.

Scattered, broken, unfulfilled my dreams are,

My unceasing emptiness bounds me,

I have been strong for very long,

Now I cannot bear the sadness within me.

Despair and memories haunts me,

Telling me that we will not be together in this life,

I want to live another life with you.

All the promises I want to keep,

Life, with a bit of happiness, I want to seek.

Sadness ruptures from the depths of heart,

Not in this life, but another,

I will stay with you till the last.

26-7-17

Reviews

[Saumya]

'The heart forgets not what it loved truly, whether it's a phase of of intimacy, love, or the people it died for, in general' and then, it is these silent, dark hours, when it actually remember, relives, and misses it the most.
Sadly, those memories and people remembered at that phase, are the ones whose arrival again, is next to impossible, but that ray of hope, somewhere stays no matter what .And it is that degree of attachment then, and now the unbearable loss, that wells up one's eyes, and that eventually turns into incessant sobs, the ones that are better hidden from the ignorant morning croud around the sufferers, who may never know and perceive anyway.

Nothing remains the same in nature, nor does those 'Unvoiced screams'. Eventually, everything comes to peace.It's therefore better to stay hopeful, and hold on in that phase.

I loved the simplicity of your poem, Najam.plus, it was very expressive, without harming the strong intensity of the theme.

Well done!😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such insightful review. You have understood the depths of my emotions very accurately. Thank you so much. It really means a lot :)

[Saumya]

You're welcome, Najam 😊

[Joey Nizz]

Remarkable! this poem is just simply amazing with the words you have chosen in each perfect line!

Thanks for sharing Najam ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

your welcome ^^

[Jasmijn]

I like this poem very much. How you capture the truth of love here is very beautiful.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much fo reading, it means a lot :)

[.]

Such a wonderful poem. I liked it a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[.]

You're welcome!

[Vicky]

Saumya kinda said everything there's to say. Very well done. 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. ☺

[Anjali]

Beautifully written! By reading your writings, I find amusing things about love, it's just so amazing! Keep writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. ☺
Good to see you.

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Avia]

This is Nicely written. Feelings can be overwhelming sometimes.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah. Thank you very much for appreciating.

[RhythmOfTheRiver]

Yup. Sometimes it's easier to vent your feelings.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, thank you so much :)

[Surya]

Emotions drives mankind if am not wrong sure for humans....
But be strong and smile at every awkward situation that life throws at you.....
Every question has an answer, if you are willing to find, same does every situation.
At last, it's a good write...I liked it....True to words and your heart....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, every question has an answer only if you seek it. Thank you very much for reading. ☺

[not your muse]

Wonderfully captured emotions of engraved sadness. Each line is provoking itself.
Very much related.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading, it means a lot.

[Ardra]

Not in this life, but another,
I will stay with you till the last.

Romance has different phases..
The courting , the honeymoon phase, the diminishing phase, then the doom phase &
get over phase ( my understanding of it)
somewhere in between we want to think of other life times and need to be with them... and then god knows why we want to :P
when one life is enough of torture... we still ask for many more...that's why we are human ;) (its human to Err & divine to forgive )
i guess...holds true

[Najam Us Saher]

Haha, that's true. Human wants are unlimited you know ;)
Thank you so very much for reading ☺