Unhappily ever after

UNHAPPILY EVER AFTER

Why is that every boy who loves truly

Finds a girl who doesn't value his love?

Why is that every girl who loves faithfully

Finds a boy who shows no respect for her love?

Why is that when both love each other truly

The world doesn't allow them to be;

Suppressed by the domination of helplessness

They stay apart and live unhappily.

23-9-17

Reviews

[Vicky]

I know little in regards to love, but of one thing I am sure: as with all things in life, it is rarely fair.

[Najam Us Saher]

True, thank you so much for a wonderful line.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometimes love isn't fair. We learn to accept less. I liked the honest thoughts leading to realistic ending. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Joey Nizz]

This is really beautiful Najam
But I guess there are reasons that are even beyond our understanding, I guess if 2 soul are meant to be then they are meant to be, but also maybe this is a test of time and space, some souls need the time to truly understand each others love and some just need the space to show them how much they need each other.
Anyways one way or an other, I have always said this, everyone in life deserves someones or that there is always someone for everyone, no matter how long it takes.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are absolutely right. Thank you so much for reading my works with utmost passion. It really means a lot. Also, I feel when we don't get what we want life surely gives us better it just takes us time to realise it.

[Joey Nizz]

your always welcome, true talent has to be recognized ^^

[SilverInk]

This is beautiful, and thanks for entering it in the contest. But, it doesn't exactly fit the criteria. It's supposed to be a short story about a particular fairy tale character's life after happily ever after. Great poem though!

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay, I get it now. My bad I misunderstood the title. But I am happy that you liked this poem, thank you so much :)

[Gee]

Not every, perhaps many but know where you are coming from. Adolescent love is mostly no more than crushes or on the boys part a hormonially charged want to see a naked woman and have sex..

[Najam Us Saher]

Absolutely right. Some love stories are incompletely completed forever.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this, it means a lot.

[Anjali]

Wow... Wonderful, it's the bittersweet truth! You really made me read it like 5 times.beautiful! I loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind words.

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[RhythmOfTheRiver]

👍 Wow, it's beautifully written...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for appreciation.

[Avia]

I haven't really thought about it that way. There are sometimes though like a divine decree that we find the perfect person for us. I guess we're just looking for that

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, thank you so much for reading.

[not your muse]

True lovers can't be separated from each other, no matter who comes their way out there.
Maybe in distance but their hearts are always stay connected.
Their networks never ever get weaker.

[Najam Us Saher]

True, thank you very much for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it. ☺

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thats soo true Najam
Sometimes, things just go out of place :)

Its destiny though!
Lovely written :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you agree. Thank you very much :)