I am really happy that you liked this one. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poems. I.. read moreI am really happy that you liked this one. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poems. I appreciate it ☺
It is very nice piece as a poem with a philosophical thought on life. But you made different theme from what you have mentioned in the line written just after the title of the poem. Though, you have mentioned the title of poem 'Sometime' many time but you have ignored the differences between 'like' and 'love'. In short it is thoughtful and emotional poem in which you have portrayed the reality of life. Thanks for sharing. :-)
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Szhzia
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I totally agree with you. I'll work on it. I am widely elated to see you back. Thank you so much ☺
i'm so happy to see you thinking of something else and i am glad to know you are happy.
i loved your way of describing and expressions in this poem.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Maybe I am happy, maybe I am not... last line is how exactly I feel. Thank you so much and yes maybe.. read moreMaybe I am happy, maybe I am not... last line is how exactly I feel. Thank you so much and yes maybe I will be happy don't you worry :)
This is a very real, and relatable piece from you, Najam.Sometimes, it is exactly those sometimes we realize how precious some people indeed were, but then all one has is regret, because they were left unhappy and unwanted.
Life offers what we exactly need, but sadly not everyone has that ability to see those perfectly precious people disguised as the most imperfect ones, ever! Yet the best 😊
I loved the simplicity and flow of this piece😊
Well done!
-Saumya
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
You really made me happy. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I am really grateful to you. .. read moreYou really made me happy. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I am really grateful to you. ☺
Every sentence depicting, different problems or happening... Many of them i also had faced...
Joined together as whole these sentences can describe 60% of a human.....
Keep writing najam
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much....I am glad that you understand... :)
I love the way you have presented a view. The description itself was a nice example for the entire piece. Simply gorgeous... and full of life!
keep it up!!!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much. Life is full of emotions I say. ☺
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