Sometimes

Sometimes

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

SOMETIMES
Sometimes we let go the things we love,
We make mistakes, we fall, we lie above.
Sometimes we try hard to make life perfect,
We realise, we apologize; after we regret.

Sometimes we feel life will fall into place,
We try harder than we could, just to catch the pace.
Sometimes we are helpless and tired of trying,
We sit back and hope, life will be worth living before dying.

Sometimes we smile when we are dead inside,
We force it, which leads to a misguide.
Sometimes we are fed up and want all this to end,
We break the barriers and become weak to bear life's bend.

Sometimes we want things so badly,
We make an effort to achieve it exactly.
Sometimes we are left with unaccomplished dreams,
We lay emotionless in tears with silent screams.

© 2018 Najam Us Saher


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Such wonderful words from a good writer. You painted all the sometimes in life that it will be forever true always.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

That's really so kind of you to think good about my poems. I cannot thank you enough. Stay blessed. .. read more
You are right. It is our decisions to reach for dreams and our decisions to forget them. I liked the honest tone and the directness of words and the thoughts. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for appreciation, it means a lot to me.
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
Good one, Najam!

Keep going.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading this. ☺
i guess it`s just life,great description

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You are right, life is all about the ups and downs. Thank you very much. ☺
Really true and relatable. A lovely write, dear... Loved the rhymes along with the whole poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am really glad that you liked this. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. ☺
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, Najam.
Relatable..this is lovely and I loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am happy to hear that you liked this, you have my greatest gratitude. ☺
Very relatable. Sure all of us have felt that way. I liked the rhymes. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much ☺
Zoya

7 Years Ago

My pleasure
so true...u hv shown reality...good work..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I mean it...
motivational ,fantastic,deep thinker.......golden words,gud one

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much... :)
I agree with Schzia about the difference in your description and the write, though this is very well written.
Have you considered breaking this piece in line breaks as stanzas? Since you're using a rhyme scheme of aa, bb, cc..., it would read nicely if you did. Also I think you can't really be 'emotionless in tears' ;P
Nice attempt.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

That was an oxymoron. I will try breaking this in stanzas. Thank you so much 😊
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

:p you're welcome (:

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

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