Seasons

Seasons

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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Life has many seasons

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SEASONS
Pleasant weather makes me cheerful,
Sun's bright, spreading its rays on flora 
And flowers bloomed.
Chasing butterflies with my little fingers,
That's when I knew, it was spring.
The rays of the sun were severe,
The breeze was no more pleasing,
It was intense heat outside,
Leaves faded from emerald green to pistachio.
All I wanted to stay at home.
Mother allowed me to eat ice-cream as much as I liked,
And told me there is no school.
That's when I knew, it was summer.
Sometimes the weather fooled me,
I played with shadow when the sunlight hit me
And later it was gone,
I noticed it was sunny and cloudy at the same time.
And water from sky poured down.
Blue sky was not to be seen,
Light flashed, it scared me and I cried.
Mother told me it was thunder
And one day it will stop raining.
I watched the drops on my window pane,
That's when I knew, it was monsoon.
Curled up and brittle, the petals of the tree were,
All the chlorophyll was lost,
They fell and untidied the lawn,
I piled them up, clutched in my little hands
And threw them up,
That's when I knew it was fall.
Trees stood bare while it snowed,
I played with the snowballs; 
Admiring the mist arise from my mouth.
Mother made me wear warm clothes,
Saying it was very cold outside.
Sitting in front of the fireplace
And curled up with a quilt,
I snuggled in my mother's lap,
And she let me sink into slumber.
That's when I knew, it was winter.

© 2018 Najam Us Saher


Author's Note

Najam Us Saher
When we are kids, we are not familiar with what the season is now. This poem is about a kid who tries to remember what season it is.

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While reading this I felt like there is a whistling sound through your words that gives me the different sounds of the seasons. Love it as your other works I do too.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I am honoured to read your kind words. :)
I simply loved this!
Reminded me of the change in the skies when I was a kid.
Thank you for drawing a beautiful picture in your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am happy to know that it was relatable. Thank you so much :)
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

You are very much welcome :)
I loved the way your feelings transitioned according to the weather.I have to insist this again here, you have abundance of talent in writing. Keep going, Najam.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am honoured to read your review which was filled with kind words. Thank you so much ☺
Hasventhran Baskaran

7 Years Ago

You are welcome
Its so true, so true. You are creative person... Remembering seasons by experiencing its affect. And important part i. e mother sheltering you from every thing......... Touching


Well i loved summer when i was a kid...
2 months holiday

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Hahaha yes the holidays were the best part.
You have no idea how much it means to me when pe.. read more
AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

Its my pleasure...
awsome creation of poem that make sense of brilliant ideology thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I thank you so much for reading... ☺
I liked this poem of yours Najam Us Saher, it was a pleasure to read, thank you......

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I thank you so much for reading. Appreciation means a lot.
Very well written, awesome! Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much. ☺
Beautifully described season I really loved it....i too played with shadows... And chasing butterfly.... Thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am glad to know that it was relatable. Thank you very much. :)
A amazing poem. I do liked the seasons. I liked your description of them. Thank you Najam for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading. I am overwhelmed to know that you found it descriptive and amazing... read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You did well and you are welcome.
Wow... I admired it a lot, its seriously better than my poem 'season'. The way you described every season is beautiful! And I really like this thing about all your poems that you use such simple words yet it's filled with so much meaning. Amazing! Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am overwhelmed to hear that. Thank you very much :)
Anjali

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome!

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