I lift my pen and write again

I wrote about us

I LIFT MY PEN AND WRITE AGAIN

Hiding my emotions under a smile, in vain.

You disappeared from my life, leaving me plain.

I cannot elucidate my feelings, I am in pain.

I want to lift my pen and write again. 

You were my sunshine like a glow,

You were like warmth, in winter snow,

Your love and concern, I cannot forgo,

I am tired hiding my pain, tears flow.

You were what I wrote about,

You and your love I couldn't doubt,

All alone by myself; Got nothing to lose or gain,

Once again, stranded alone in your thoughts

I lift my pen and write again. 

I let myself loose now, 

I am living in this torment, only I know how.

Separated myself from others, my emotions  are supressed,

I want to spend an entire life with you, 

That's my only request.

I wait to be happy; to let my emotions drain,

I cry tears and with a smile

I lift my pen and write again. 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your entry. I will refrain from opinion at the moment to be fair to all the entries

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Every procrastinated writer needs to read this!
This stage when you're in non writing mode for weeks really sucks.
PUN- when you get an outflow of emotions, you pen it down with extreme emotions.
Beautifully expressed and captured intense emotions.
" You were like warmth, in winter snow,
Your love and concern, I cannot forgo,
I am tired hiding my pain, tears flow."
Good job saher! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Good to see you after a long time. I thank you very much for taking the time to read this. ☺

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

I cry tears and with a smile
I lift my pen and write again

Yes, you should.You are an amazing writer with beautiful thoughts.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for such kind and motivating words. ☺

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

You are welcome

[Wayfaring stranger]

Well you got your way with words as well. Nice fall of emotions and creative thoughts. Well done.

[Najam Us Saher]

How sweet of you. Thank you so much. 😊

[Wayfaring stranger]

You welcome I really like that poem.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Filled with emotions and good use of words as well..very good job and the start is really catchy

[Najam Us Saher]

As always, I am overwhelmed to read your views. It really means a lot. :)

[SZHZIA]

A poem filled with true emotions in which you attempted to word both the state of mind and heart simultaneously. In our life it is emotions and internal feeling that force us to do something in life. Here you have lifted your pen to write again due to feelings and emotions. Keep writing. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. I hope you are fine. ☺

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome.... :-)

[AcasualPawn]

Well, perfectly written, for someone who lost his loved one, these will be his exact response....

And your writing style is polar opposite of mine... After reading your 3-4 creative poems its my conclusion...
Keep it up

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much...I like pouring out my emotions.

[MaximumFlight]

This one really puts you in the mindset of a writer in my opinion. When you really have nothing left to keep you going, you just have to keep writing. Wonderful job :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are absolutely correct. Thank you very much for reading. You made me really happy. :)

[Jay-LH]

I love this, very well written. Love the Rhyming too.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺

[Jay-LH]

You're welcome

[Joey Nizz]

The same words on my mind but with your pen, nicely wrote najam :) you're words in each line was filled with real raw emotions.

Well done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I agree that we all feel the same. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Your right, we're all only humans after all :)