When it rains

Only rain can understand my pain

WHEN IT RAINS

Look, how gently the rain falls

merrily falling creating crystal bubbles.

Chilly wind makes me shiver 

and the voice of rain soothes me to sleep.

The essence of petrichor relieves me,

All this is a delight and bliss.

Still, it is hard to accept the fact

of you being away,

The sky cries along with me

and there is no more happiness. 

Water of the sky cannot fill the emptiness inside me,

I am alone looking at the waterfall,

I cry and rain cries along,

Rain and I are together,

Here we belong.

Volume of cloud being burdened with rain

is nothing compared to my heavy heart.

It is rain who has cried along with me since the start.

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

Right now it is actually raining at my place. hahaha.. Its an awessom work. Rain with pain. good one. feelings described and the flow is perfect.

Volume of cloud being burdurned with rain
is nothing compared to my heavy heart.
It is rain who have cried along with me since the start.

these lines are my favorite...

[Abraham George]

i agree with you

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really very happy that you liked it.
Thank you so much. ☺

[jazzymars]

I second the motion.. haha.. nice poem

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you for reading jazzymars. I am happy that you liked this poem.

[jazzymars]

Of course, we are hear not just to post but to read also. Thanks also for accepting my request.

[Najam Us Saher]

Did you change your user name ?
It was 'Broken hearts'. Was it ?

[jazzymars]

I'm just new here. Started only yesterday. Who's 'broken hearts'?

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay.
You mentioned that I accepted your request. So I got confused you being 'Broken hearts' That's why I asked you did you change your user name. I am mistaken. Sorry.

[jazzymars]

I mean my friend request...

[Najam Us Saher]

You didn't send any.

[jazzymars]

Yah i'm sure.

[Abraham George]

jazzymars you didnt. May be you sent but she is not your friend yet.

[jazzymars]

Nope, I only send friend request to anybody, i didn't ask other request... :D

[jazzymars]

and i'm not 'broken hearts'... :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey I am sorry I was mistaken, because I got a request from broken hearts this morning I was confused that it was you and thought maybe you have changed your user name.

[jazzymars]

no problem

[Misty]

So deep and beautiful poem. One of the brightest examples stated. i loved the entire content considering rain and tears an essential and equal material here. Loved the essence you've put here. And yea, this poem is an example of lighting light through darkness...
Keep it up!!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind words. I mean it ☺

[ashish hajagulkar]

you have given delighted meaning to rain and pains
nice artistic poem

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy that you liked it. Thank you so much ☺

[Zoya]

You do possess a talent to evoke empathy among the readers after reading your works. It was so full of sadness and truth. A bittersweet poem. Well written!

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me really happy. Thank you very much ☺

[Zoya]

Glad to know. You're welcome!

[Tamika]

This is written so beautifully. So emotional. I really loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading. 😀

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I love petrichor even more than the rain :)
I think this is a very nice piece. It reminded me of the song 'Rain and Tears'...

Well penned emotions.

[Najam Us Saher]

Even I love petrichor. I have a scent too which smells like it.
I'll just correct it. Thank you very much. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's sounds lovely :)
You're welcome. A pleasure always :))

[wordman]

the sky is crying with you,lovely thoughts

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy that you found it to be lovely. Thank you very much :)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Surya]

It is indeed beautiful....rain and drain, cry with droplets...it's purely honest...and I liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you do. Thank you very much :)

[Priyanshi]

It's cloudy at my place...seems to rain soon...rain takes away pain..
" I cry and rain cries along,
Rain and I are together,
Here we belong."..beautiful lines..
Loved the poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading. I am really happy to know that you liked it.

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Abraham George]

Here there is no rain to cry with me now after i read this.

emotions are heart breaking and eyes flooding

[Najam Us Saher]

I don't know what to say. I am sorry I made you cry.
Thank you very much for reading this.