Your Existence

30 June

YOUR EXISTENCE 

You are miles far from me, we have to be this way.

Situation was such we had to be away,

You are my mother, that's all I can say,

I miss you a lot more today as it is your birthday.

I know not how you are,

I am yours yet you are far,

You left, leaving me with a scar,

And cause me to struggle in a never ending war.

All I pray that every happiness finds you,

And give you a chance to be renewed,

I can never understand the pain you have gone through,

Being far away, all I can do is wish you.

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

what a lovely poem.happy birthday to your mom.
:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

So well written... it's a great occasion and I wish your mom a very happy birthday... it's a birthday season najam... coincidently yours is on 30th June and mine is on 13th... even I missed my mom on her birthday..this month has got lots of things to remember... !!

[Najam Us Saher]

You are correct. I feel good to see you back. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts.

[poiuyuyt]

very creative . i realy liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much :)

[ashish hajagulkar]

just excellent creative lines that defines great women on the Earth is MOM and you also shared your feeling mom !
thank you for sharing

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading :)

[pragya gaur]

London distance love ...It somewhere describes my own story...I really liked it Najam

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :)

[wordman]

long distance love,sometimes it all comes together,profound write

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am widely elated to know that you liked it.

[Mr.Writer]

This is such a special, beautiful and sweet poem of yours Najam!
Well done, keep it up!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much...It really means a lot.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Ethan]

You should probably separate most of these phrases with periods, rather than commas. Also, war does not rhyme with "are","far", and "scar." Other than that, nice poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

I'll try to work on that part. Thank you so much :)

[Anjali]

Wow..... Such a heart wrenching poem! I really really liked this one! I think that it's your best piece. Though, all your poems seems special, this one seems like the super special one, in my opinion. A brilliant poem, indeed!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I can feel your happiness when you say that you liked this one. You made me happy too. ☺

[Anjali]

It's a pleasure to read your writings!