Your Existence

30 June

YOUR EXISTENCE 

You are miles far from me, we have to be this way.

Situation was such we had to be away,

You are my mother, that's all I can say,

I miss you a lot more today as it is your birthday.

I know not how you are,

I am yours yet you are far,

You left, leaving me with a scar,

And cause me to struggle in a never ending war.

All I pray that every happiness finds you,

And give you a chance to be renewed,

I can never understand the pain you have gone through,

Being far away, all I can do is wish you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to be away from your family. Our dear mother do need us and if we are far away. A letter or phone call. A blessing for dear mom. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, it is difficult indeed. Thank you very much for reading this one, it means a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem nd you are welcome Najam.

[SZHZIA]

This poem is combination of happiness and sadness. I have tried to make understand someone and pray for her. Nice job. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Zia

[Najam Us Saher]

Always happy to see you...Thank you very much 😊

[Sandipta$]

Sad bt it shows...how kind u r.... ..... U r in pain... Still want hpyness for Other's... Nice

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah I am glad you liked this. Thank you very much :)

[Jay-LH]

Brilliant, well done. :D keep it up

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. ☺

[Roch Ketchum]

"You left, leaving me with a scar,
And cause me to struggle in a never ending war."

Leaves the poem open for multiple interpretations. Nice one.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah that's a unique thing about people. Many readers make many interpretations. Thank you so much for reading. I mean it ☺

[Misty]

Certainly brought me smiles as well as tears...
This one, i can say is one of your best pieces I've read...
Emotions striking right into the heart, she must be very happy reading this note from above...
Distance doesn't matter my dear, all that matters is the deep bonding you share which can never make you apart. I love this poem written with love...
Keep writing..
"Happy Birthday " to your mom...

[Najam Us Saher]

I am overwhelmed to hear that. Thank you so much :)
It really means so much to me.

[Misty]

you're welcome

[MaximumFlight]

Very sad, but very beautiful.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked it and understood the emotions behind it.

[MaximumFlight]

I almost lost my mother about a year ago, not to health or anything, but I feared her loss and for a while after, I blamed myself for what happened. She's alive and well now, but I know I'll miss her when I graduate school in about a year.

[Sikandar Khan]

Wow You have Wrote For YUour Mom On The Occasion Of Her Birthday....May You Unites With Her Soon...........

[Najam Us Saher]

Not gonna happen...Thank you so much for reading.

[Sikandar Khan]

Believe In Allah ..........

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautifully written..keep it up girl.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked it :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure....

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Wow Najam. I don't know how to review this poem.I'm in loss of words. Amazing write. Happy Birthday to your Mom. Hope she could see this beautiful poem you have written for her.

[Najam Us Saher]

No...Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked this :)