More people need to really think like this. It's one thing to say it, but sometimes we may even be guilty of some sort of intolerance. I realized something, life is full of many different people. You can never really understand someone, much less the whole world, all we can do for people is love them and pray for them. That said, very nice work👏
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
You are absolutely correct. World is very big to meet everyone but it becomes easy to live together .. read moreYou are absolutely correct. World is very big to meet everyone but it becomes easy to live together when everyone is peaceful. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your views.
This is an important & clearly-stated message for our current times. I so agree with every point you are making here. There's only one thing I noticed . . . the word "humanity" is actually vague -- what do you mean by this? It would be good to SHOW us with some detailed firsthand examples of what "humanity" looks like. "There is humanity in us" -- what does that really mean? I think it's a crutch to use a long-a*s abstract term to say what you want to say . . . SHOW US, instead. I want to see word pictures of people being kind & accepting to each other -- give me specific examples of how people act when they are showing their "humanity" -- show me people saying & doing the right thing. I do not think you can change this poem, but this is something to keep in mind for future writing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I understand your point. By writing 'There is humanity in us'I meant to remind people that there is .. read moreI understand your point. By writing 'There is humanity in us'I meant to remind people that there is humanity in each one of us and everyone should be kind and concerned. I will definately remember your words when I write something in future.
Thank you very much for reading. I appreciate your words.
Wise words for the fragility of life in the modern age.
The trouble is that the few who dwell beneath humanity create so much friction for all of those who dwell within it. Life never really reaches a state of true equilibrium.
A nice write with a hopeful moral message contained within.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I am really happy that you understod the message I wanted to convey. Thank you so much :)
Difference is wrong according to most if not all societies. They want similarity, conformity, not individuality and abstract concepts of personality of all beautiful minds. This just makes me think that the world tends to promote things they tend to discriminate against. A human is a human, no matter what. That's my opinion though. Good job.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I agree with your views...I really like your thoughts about individuality. Thank you for sharing the.. read moreI agree with your views...I really like your thoughts about individuality. Thank you for sharing them.
You are right Najam.
"There is peace and happiness,
Only when you are kind and concerned,
And realise humanity is above all the riches."
The above lines. I wish could happen. Today world controlled by the rich and the few. Only way to change. Common people stand as one. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Yes I wish the same and hope that people realise the importance of humanity in future and make this.. read moreYes I wish the same and hope that people realise the importance of humanity in future and make this earth a better place to live...Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts....I appreciate it.. :)
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