To Life

TO LIFE

I will smile even when you are giving me a thousand reasons to cry,

I will be fair with you- my life,

Even though you were so unfair with me.

I will not be the way you had been with me,

Because I want to be remembered as the one 

Who was smiling in spite all of her griefs.

I want to be remembered as the one

Who kept on repeating her mistakes and never failed to admit them.

I want to be remembered as the one 

Who had endless hope and her expectations ruined her.

You had crushed me and choked me to death,

I am a little distance away from dying,

But you are so cruel,

You take away the lives of others who are happy in their lives,

You steal the breath of those who struggle to be alive,

And don't grant death to those who don't want to live.

You are a bitter truth,

Now death seems a beautiful lie,

But you are still so cruel to give me hope that tomorrow will be better,

Since all these years I've lost and been hurt,

You have kept me trapped,

I hate the sunshine and another day,

That couldn't bring brightness in my life.

Each day I am struggling,

Life is sustaining me even when I don't want to be alive.

I believe life is meaningful and worthy,

But why don't I get what I have loved?

Author's Note

I accept the fact that life is worth living...These are just feelings what I am going through...
It's my frustration on life...I still believe life has something good for me..I really appreciate and value my life but sometimes I feel such...

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

yes, life has something good for you. just keep looking for answers and don't give up.
we all had those days. if this is one way to comfort you then keep writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah writing really helps me...Thank you so much..

[Jobira]

Life is beautiful and hard at the same time. But, what makes you human is that, the adrenaline inside of you that alway fights, so that you can see a better tomorrow. Tomorrow's always better than yesterday. If looked at the hardest thing that happened, today you just laugh, for the thoughts that went through your head at that moment.

Good writing, lot of feelings poured to it.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right....we laugh tomorrow at the thoughts that go by....Thank you so much for reading...I appreciate it... :)

[RannunculusBlooms]

this is a very powerful piece.. keep up the great work!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.....Glad that you liked it :)

[Zoya]

Maybe this isn't your time...Im sure, life must have something good in store for you, just be patient...i love your spirit here...to rise above the difficulties you face, keep living your life. Nicely written!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah maybe time isn't right for me now....Thank you so much for such kind words...I appreciate it... :)

[Zoya]

No worries :)

[Hope]

I too have felt like this!
So I can relate.
Beautifully expressed work:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading.....Glad you liked it...☺

[Hope]

My pleasure

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is a very nice poem..i can relate to your poems all the time and they are so many poems of yours that i can feel myself in them...really good work..keep it up.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy to know that...Thank you so much :)

[Anjali]

This is life, I guess. A lot of problems​ come and we get broken sometimes, actually a lot of times. It feels like hell, and when it finally goes away and we are happy for some moments, another problem comes and it goes all over again! But, this is what life is like, we should live cuz of those special moments and for those people who stood beside us. A beautiful poem indeed!

[Najam Us Saher]

You are absolutely correct....Thank you so much for reading...I am glad you found it to be beautiful.

[Anjali]

You're welcome!😊

[Sikandar Khan]

Thats Good Saher And Give Hope To Those Who Lost Their Hopes Its All About Fight Back......

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...thank you so much for reading...I am glad that you liked it...

[Surya]

I say, Life is worth living accepting with you....
Everyone enjoys happiness but why cant they enjoy sadness?.....both the emotions are offered by same life......but I believe passing tests an hardships will give you an immense pleasure one day with a beautiful gift, just ffight for that....
All in all your poem prtrayed it well...I enjoyed it..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you did....Thank you very much....
I also feel the necissity of sadness in one's life because only then they realise the value of happiness...but what if there is no happiness left in their life ?

[Surya]

there is nothing that left it's upto us to find.....if someone feels like no happiness left with them for whole life then there is nothing for them, I say cry for your loss that's an emotion, it's ok to weep...but one day move away from that place learning something from them and find who you are....Then there comes happiness...Just a move decides it all

[Sofia]

Even after going through all this..u still have hope nd thts a courageous act...everyone has got their own share of sorrows...we should always enjoy life nd be happy...btw this was a great work...be happy nd keep smiling... 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah that's the only option I've got now... Thank you so much...I appreciate your wise words... ☺

[Sofia]

Thank you nd you're welcome 😊