Acrostic poetry

ACROSTIC POETRY

PAIN

Physically and mentally tortures us

And doesn't allow us to be happy

In any circumstance and

Negative thoughts are filled in our mind

LONELY

Lost in their own world 

Often feeling depressed to be all on their own

Never finding any joy in any other thing

Except to recollect memories that made them happy

Lost all the care and concern from everyone

Yearning for happiness and someone to understand them

LOVE

Leaving behind all the fears

Once I started to like you

Very thing I realised you were the one

Everything I ever wanted

GREW APART

Good and bad was forgotten and

Regrets started consuming me up

Each time I got closer to you

We only got separated

After all the trying and my cries

Peace we couldn't find 

And fate constrained us 

Reality was really hard to accept and 

Time was responsible for drifting us

HOPE

Helpless thoughts surround my mind

Of the future we planned

Pleasurable and joyful life 

Exists in a place only in our dreamland

TIME

Together we decided to bear life's difficulty

In the midst of darkness we stand

Moments spent while the clock is ticking

Every action of now will tomorrow be a past

POET

Person who inspires and understands

One who feels the pain of others

Every time thoughts weave in their mind

Trapped and surrounded in their own dreams 

WRITING

Wonderful thoughts which consoles oneself

Rested on a sheet of paper

Intensely heart touching and

Thoughts which are relatable and are

Inspiring and encouraging which

Nurtures every individual's mind and helps them

Gain information or empathize with someone

SLEEP

Souls from one's body

Longs to rest and be at peace

Exempting the worry and 

Enriching the mind to be

Peaceful and happy

FATE

Faith in one's life

About the future and 

The time passed by

Engraved destiny written before we were born

FRIEND

Finding someone close to your heart

Reaching them in troubled times

Inspiring them always 

Empathizing with them in times of need

Never leave them alone 

Despite all the difficulties

LIFE

Letting oneself out of the comfort zone

In a place where they belong

Fight battles with self 

Exist and be strong to survive

TEARS

Trapped in melancholy and woe

Engulfed thoughts and memories

Are making me feel hopeless 

Raging war with myself

Struggling and fighting to be happy

BROTHER

Be with you at your worst

Reaches you in times of need

Only one who feels and understand your feelings

Together he stays always

He is the one who is a best friend too

Every emotion of a sister is felt by him

Rare gem found only by lucky ones

 

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

this is remarkable! i guess it's very hard to make this poem. i would like to try this someday.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah surely give it a try....Thank you so much for reading...I appreciate it...☺

[z.chéri]

very creative! :) well done!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much..... ☺

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Wow, you are really very talented.I'm in lost of words to review this poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind words. Really I mean it.....

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

You are welcome

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh Fabolouse Your This Writing IS Very Unique In Huge Collection Of Your Writings...Eveery Feelings Is Defined Very Beautifully And Simple And Thats Look WOnderfull......i Hope One Day You Will Rock The WOrld.......

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for your kind words and for believing in me....

[Sikandar Khan]

I Always Believe In You......

[Joey Nizz]

Beautifully described, with each line I have read brought up a smile on my face :)

Thank You najam for sharing this with us! ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad I brought a smile on your face. Thank you so much.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome and thanks again ^^

[Giulia King]

Amazing poem!! "TEARS
Trapped in melancholy and woe" So many amazing lines in this piece. I don't know what to choose first.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy to know that you liked it. Thank you so much.

[RannunculusBlooms]

relatable and extremely well written

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot. I appreciate it...

[Jay-LH]

This is very good and well written. Also very relatable

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate it :)

[Priyanshi]

A unique poem...the way you presented is excellent....you have portrayed your emotions so well...so so so good..especially those lines written on "friend", " lonely" and "writing". Keep it up, Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I am really happy to know that you liked it ☺

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure,dear writer.

[Sofia]

Beautiful poem!!..i liked that "friend" part...each nd every word is beautiful..i liked this poem😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it :)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!!