Acrostic poetry

ACROSTIC POETRY

PAIN

Physically and mentally tortures us

And doesn't allow us to be happy

In any circumstance and

Negative thoughts are filled in our mind

LONELY

Lost in their own world 

Often feeling depressed to be all on their own

Never finding any joy in any other thing

Except to recollect memories that made them happy

Lost all the care and concern from everyone

Yearning for happiness and someone to understand them

LOVE

Leaving behind all the fears

Once I started to like you

Very thing I realised you were the one

Everything I ever wanted

GREW APART

Good and bad was forgotten and

Regrets started consuming me up

Each time I got closer to you

We only got separated

After all the trying and my cries

Peace we couldn't find 

And fate constrained us 

Reality was really hard to accept and 

Time was responsible for drifting us

HOPE

Helpless thoughts surround my mind

Of the future we planned

Pleasurable and joyful life 

Exists in a place only in our dreamland

TIME

Together we decided to bear life's difficulty

In the midst of darkness we stand

Moments spent while the clock is ticking

Every action of now will tomorrow be a past

POET

Person who inspires and understands

One who feels the pain of others

Every time thoughts weave in their mind

Trapped and surrounded in their own dreams 

WRITING

Wonderful thoughts which consoles oneself

Rested on a sheet of paper

Intensely heart touching and

Thoughts which are relatable and are

Inspiring and encouraging which

Nurtures every individual's mind and helps them

Gain information or empathize with someone

SLEEP

Souls from one's body

Longs to rest and be at peace

Exempting the worry and 

Enriching the mind to be

Peaceful and happy

FATE

Faith in one's life

About the future and 

The time passed by

Engraved destiny written before we were born

FRIEND

Finding someone close to your heart

Reaching them in troubled times

Inspiring them always 

Empathizing with them in times of need

Never leave them alone 

Despite all the difficulties

LIFE

Letting oneself out of the comfort zone

In a place where they belong

Fight battles with self 

Exist and be strong to survive

TEARS

Trapped in melancholy and woe

Engulfed thoughts and memories

Are making me feel hopeless 

Raging war with myself

Struggling and fighting to be happy

BROTHER

Be with you at your worst

Reaches you in times of need

Only one who feels and understand your feelings

Together he stays always

He is the one who is a best friend too

Every emotion of a sister is felt by him

Rare gem found only by lucky ones

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the set-up of the poem. Each set of lines. Worthwhile and solid were they defined. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much friend for the time you give to my poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and you are welcome my friend.

[Najam Us Saher]

This is the most heart touching sentence one can say about my poetry, It means so much to me.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Najam, thank you for entering this collection of acrostics in my contest! :)
You've covered a lot here and it's interesting to see how you think.

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey, thank you very much for reading this. It means a lot :)

[Abraham George]

Wow . I really didn't saw this before . It's really good.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am surpised to hear that. Thank you so much for reading :)

[Abraham George]

i don't know why i miss this.

[Tamika]

Wowww you are amazing at acrostic poetry!! Such a good first impression! 'GREW APART' pulled on the heart strings and honestly brought tears to my eyes, because I feel like I can fully relate :( each of these poems were written perfectly and beautifully. I also loved 'TEARS', I like how with some of these they were almost like reading a very poetic dictionary, such great descriptions of what the word meant, and I absolutely adore how some told a story, in the few lines provided. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Your reviews are making me crazy. You made me very happy. I am glad that you read my poems. Thank you very much. I hope you will find some time for reading my other poetry too I am sure you will like it. ☺

[Ayushi Beura]

ACROSTIC POETRY!!!! WELL IT WAS TOO INTERESTING READING IT....I REALLY LIKED YOUR REAL THOUGHT ABOUT THE COMMON EXPRESSIONS THAT WE FEEL IN OUR LIFE !!!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really elated to know that. Thank you so much :)

[Ayushi Beura]

My pleasure

[Stella Armour]

I enjoy reading acrostic poetry and this is a fine example, may i just say that it would look more pleasing if only the verse titles were in large print and not the whole verse.Well done and much enjoyed

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay I get it. Thank you very much for reading this. I am truly grateful that you liked this ☺

[Stan Lee]

Nice work. Some great acrostics happening here! Thanks for sharing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading. Glad you liked it. :)

[Karmee]

What a wonderful write here, Awesome

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much...I am really happy to know that you liked it :)

[MaximumFlight]

Beautiful is all I can really say. My mind is blown away.

[Najam Us Saher]

You have no idea how happy you made me. I lack words to express my gratitude :)

[Misty]

So so so much sweet and true...
Completely loved this one!
Its all about writing that brings souls like us together to one place and grow together with friendship... So nice reading your work...
P- Passion in each word
L- Love binding hearts
E- Elated memories to remind
A- Affirmative voice all over
S- Sweetness all around the piece
U- Us getting inspired from this
R- Relatable and Resonate
E- Encouraging and exactly to the point...

PLEASURE reading your work!!!!
Keep it up!

[Najam Us Saher]

That's the most beautiful thing I can ever hear...I loved your acrostic poem too...Thank you so much I mean it...you made me really happy 😀

[Misty]

You're welcome...