Music box

Melodious sound

MUSIC BOX

Oh! Such sweet music,

It is a musical doll,

But trapped in a box. 

Reviews

[MaximumFlight]

Wow. This poem is very cute and innocent until it says; "But trapped in a box."

A sweet and innocent poem and then a dark and philosophical twist that makes this abstract and makes you feel as if maybe the box is life and we all the dolls that play until the music stops and the box closes, like a coffin.

Wonderful job :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Exactly....I am glad that you understood what I wanted to convey.Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Simple words and so true. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. I am really happy to know that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Pain of a beautiful thing.Nicely written

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much....I am glad that you liked it...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

This is just soo adorable....💛💛

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[Sikandar Khan]

Vey Nice Short Words But Thinkable

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

[Jay-LH]

Short but sweet... awesome

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot. I appreciate it.

[Anjali]

It sure is small, but the imagination and creativity in it is mind blowing! I'm sorry I wasn't able to read it before, but I knew I would read it, cuz your poems are always amazing. Keep writing!😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Shasha]

This is a short poem but really a deep one! What I understood from it is, that maybe we all are trapped in one or the other thing, but nothing can stop you until you have that hope, that joyness, just like the ever smiling doll! If talk about haiku, then it's perfect! Short, but speaks a lot!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are correct we all are trapped in our own lives singing our own songs and trying to please everyone. Thank you so much. You made me feel a bit better.

[Shasha]

That's all right! Always there for poems! I am glad that I am correct!

[Zoya]

Hmm, quite thoughtful. Nice imagery.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much...

[Zoya]

you're welcome

[Abraham George]

Sorry to say this. Don't feel sad

I didn't find anything interested in this poem while compared to all other creations of yours.

[Najam Us Saher]

This is a haiku.....

[Abraham George]

i didn't said it is bad. while compared to your other creations ................

[Najam Us Saher]

That's okay if you didn't like it that much. I understand :)