Existence

First attempt to write a haiku

EXISTENCE 

I am not living,

There is just my presence here,

Now, I just exist.

Reviews

[Joey Nizz]

We all exist for a reason, and you existence in this site have brought true meaning to writing.

Thank you for sharing Najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome

[Surya]

Ohh...much it is
Haiku it doesn't look like your first piece..You manged it well..
I loved it..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

oh!please,
don't tell me that this was your first haiku!!




suchhhhh a wonderful one and it has given it's meaning just definite and enough to be expresses!!!


great work girl!

[Najam Us Saher]

This is really my first one. You made me very happy. Thank you so much for such kind words. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure...dearest!

[zaisham9393]

A great piece! Thank you for sharing Najam :)!

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading ☺

[wordman]

if there is no love in our hearts we just exist

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right sir. Sometimes we also simply exist when no one understands that love and when dreams remain unfulfilled. Thank you so much for reading.

[wordman]

so we must always talk to each other about our dreams

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! Your first haiku turned out to be deep and thought provoking!
I like it Najam!
Welcome to haiku's!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much 😀

[Mr.Writer]

No problemo!