Existence

First attempt to write a haiku

EXISTENCE 

I am not living,

There is just my presence here,

Now, I just exist.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometimes we do exist only. We can feel like a ghost. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you for reading this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Taz]

It is short and sweet, kind of like this review!

[Najam Us Saher]

How sweet of you, thank you very much for reading.

[Taz]

Hey, any time!

[MaximumFlight]

I don't think existing is a state of mater, but a state of reality to oneself AND a state of being. Love it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you ☺

[Neville]

Excellent just about sums it up

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[Karmee]

Love this write. Very well put

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for your kind visit. I appreciate it.

[Karmee]

no problem, keep writing always

[Roch Ketchum]

Really amazing for a first attempt. Keep up the good work buddy.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

I Have Many Questions In My Mind Unanswered WHen I Will Get Answer........

[Anjali]

I really don't know much about haiku, but, this haiku that you wrote is really heart wrenching. I really liked the way you put up your words. Amazing write!

[Najam Us Saher]

I really thank you so much. ☺

[Anjali]

And you're very welcome!😊

[Abhishek Asthana]

this is the way to begin... each word is budding...
good work najam... keep writing

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

First haiku! And a good one..
And your presence means alot and there life always have a meaning...beautiful haiku

[Najam Us Saher]

I have no words to express my gratitude to you... :)