Better without me

Feeling of deliberately separating onself from others.

BETTER WITHOUT ME

I stop myself from being involved in any situation,

I think I may create difficulties.

The consequence of my presence you cannot see,

And so I feel you are better off without me.

Being alone pricks me,

I want to be with everyone,

But thinking about the blame I might be,

I stay back and feel they are better off without me.

Being all by myself,

Wanting to smile a bit,

Heard a laughter and I want to go and be with them,

I don't know about the inconvenience I may cause,

Future, I cannot foresee,

I stay back all alone thinking they are better off without me.

I want to get along,

I want to be among everyone,

I don't know when my words can hurt them all

And start a quarrel,

Thinking about the consequence and the blames,

I remain at a place,

Whispering silently with a tear that they are better off without me.

Waiting for a smile and lots of glee,

I know my past, future I plan it to be,

Watching everyone from a distance,

It makes me solaced to see that they are happy and better off without me. 

Reviews

[Harley Quinn]

This is very powerful and also dark. This is the depression talking. I can by your're writing that your a good person with a great soul. So if this is about you that's not true. They are better of with you. Your're very talent keep up the great work.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words are comforting. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poems.
You are one of a kind.

[Jay-LH]

You are a really great writer. keep up the good work. well done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

Again Nice Feeling That Expresses Your Sad Feelings..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like to think I'm better off without anyone lol
I liked your use of repetition. Gives off a nice flow. Emotions always seem to find their way in your writings... Well penned :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes we are definately better without anyone. One should not be dependant. Thank you very much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True indeed :)
You're welcome, Najam. Always a pleasure reading your works :))

[CAPOLAVORO]

The "better of without me" line is a good way to add up emotion into everything. I like how you put hopes in all the negative things that was going on. Well done. Keep writing.

-Capolavoro

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for such kind words. I appreciate it. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

This is beauty in words!
I loved every line written!
Kinda can relate to it, was happy to read something that i always wanted to say.

Thank you Najam this was a very good read!

[Najam Us Saher]

That's good to know that this was relatable. Thank you very much. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Yea it was and thanks again for it!
And your very much welcome ^^

[Farhan Shaikh]

Beautiful poem, the title woll catch everyone's attention..
Good job! Very interesting poem

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad you found it interesting to read. ☺

[wordman]

the world would never be better off without you ! someone needs you !

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes that's true. There will always be someone. Thank you so much ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

woah...another great and adorable work done by you!!....
such a true piece.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad you found it great. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure beautiful!

[Mr.Writer]

First, the repetition was awesomeeee!
It was well placed and this amazing poem, had emotions dwelling around it, engaging me to read the whole poem!
It was also sad to see someone sacrifice their love for the happiness of someone...
Keep it up!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)