Better without me

Feeling of deliberately separating onself from others.

BETTER WITHOUT ME

I stop myself from being involved in any situation,

I think I may create difficulties.

The consequence of my presence you cannot see,

And so I feel you are better off without me.

Being alone pricks me,

I want to be with everyone,

But thinking about the blame I might be,

I stay back and feel they are better off without me.

Being all by myself,

Wanting to smile a bit,

Heard a laughter and I want to go and be with them,

I don't know about the inconvenience I may cause,

Future, I cannot foresee,

I stay back all alone thinking they are better off without me.

I want to get along,

I want to be among everyone,

I don't know when my words can hurt them all

And start a quarrel,

Thinking about the consequence and the blames,

I remain at a place,

Whispering silently with a tear that they are better off without me.

Waiting for a smile and lots of glee,

I know my past, future I plan it to be,

Watching everyone from a distance,

It makes me solaced to see that they are happy and better off without me. 

Reviews

[Harley Quinn]

This is very powerful and also dark. This is the depression talking. I can by your're writing that your a good person with a great soul. So if this is about you that's not true. They are better of with you. Your're very talent keep up the great work.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words are comforting. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poems.
You are one of a kind.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I do this a lot I am a loner by choice sometimes a lot
I like this poem it spoke to me in many words.
I like the repetitive phrases too
I just like it, thanks so much for sending a personal piece of yourself to my poetry comp good luck

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy that you liked this. Thank you very much :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

you are welcome

[Callial]

I can feel the emotion in this poem and I can relate wholeheartedly to it. Know you are not alone in your struggles we have others to help lift us up.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, we all feel this way in some point in our lives. Thank you so much for reading, I am happy that I could write something you could relate.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

So much of pain in one poem.Well written. But, I feel that you can make wonders if you write feel good poems.You have a good poetry skill.It's just a suggestion of mine.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. I will surely try to write. ☺ Thank you so much.

[Abhishek Asthana]

when negativity arises in someone's life so it's almost take an era to get away... so please prevent it to take a permanent place in your heart...

Just hope you understand... this poem is consist of fear and emotions...please pay attention to my words, never be so negative in your life... Awesome creation !!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree. Sometimes the situation changes us to be the ones we doesn't want to be.

[MaximumFlight]

If I can just say, wow. That is... Dark. I love it. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad to know that you liked it. Thank you so much ☺

[Surya]

A kind heart of your's..That's all I could say...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Not really kind. It depends on the situation. Anyway thank you 😀

[APOORVA]

gazab!
behtareen !
Loved it :)
so drenched in love and heart ache

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Very beautifully done! Good job

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[Suhd]

Good work Najamus Saher :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading☺