Life goes on

Closer look towards nature.

LIFE GOES ON

I walked down the path looking at the trees,

Mesmerized by the scene,

I let myself go along with ease, 

Wind was strong to disturb the leaves,

And they fell with an autumn breeze.

Then I realized even the leaves are temporary,

They grow again and there is spring.

I moved on and looked at the waves,

It made me lost in daze,

The sand was washed away beneath my feet,

The waves come and they are gone,

They rise up and they fall,

Nature conveys broader meaning,

Only if we understand,

It provides calmness,

It reminds life goes on.

Reviews

[Sikandar Khan]

Nice And Thoughtfull Scenery Of Nature And Lesson We Can Learn From Nature..........

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes we can learn innumerable lessons from nature. Thank you so much ☺

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

A feel good poem about nature and life.Well written and very refreshing to read.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much feeling happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Life does go on, thats the cycle of life, you described it beautifully.

Well wrote Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome Najam, Keep writing!

[Surya]

That's true, a close picture of nature, I liked it...And life goes on....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yep....Thank you so much. ☺

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A very to the point piece.

You have illustrated how all the answers for our journey through life are reflected in our natural surroundings. Life goes on for nature just as it goes on for us. Never constant. Always changing.

A nice piece of reflective writing. Relevant and submerged in truth. Nice work.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind words. I appreciate it ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

So true. Life goes on whatever happens but it seems sometimes we stop mid journey...

Nice reading this. Well penned :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh yeah I'll just correct it 😀 Thank you so much.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome. A pleasure :))

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly... very true... that's why one should take the positives from life and move forward... it must goes on... beautifully described

[Najam Us Saher]

One can really learn many things from nature. Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wonderful write saher.
Very good and interesting..
Such a lovely piece..
It's true..life goes on..
Whatever happens..
We live..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah....I am very happy to know that you liked it. ☺