Although your language is simplistic, I feel that is all it needs! You do not need to use overly complicated words to express anything in life and I feel (especially with poetry, or perhaps life in general), a few words or the smallest of actions ca n mean everything.
Your poem flowed nicely from beginning to end, you had lovely imagery of earth and life all the way through and it was altogether calming to read.
As always, thank you for entering.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I am extremely happy that you find my poems to be simplistic in style, I also feel poetry should be .. read moreI am extremely happy that you find my poems to be simplistic in style, I also feel poetry should be such. Thank you very much. 😀
Very much true. In our busy lives we tend to overlook the beauty of nature around us. Everything here, teaches us something or the other...we need to observe it, understand for ourselves. Then everything in life has meaning. Great job!
I'm really happy to know that you have moved on in life. I know I'm young, and I can't give you relationship advices but still it's good to know that you are moving on. By the way, the poem is beautiful, as always!😊
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Hey you caught the words wrong. I meant to say that I moved on from the place where I was observing .. read moreHey you caught the words wrong. I meant to say that I moved on from the place where I was observing the tree. 😀 By the way thank you so much.
i love this. Short, sweet, simple and inspiring!!! You have just given me so many ideas for future poetry! Nature is Definitely one of my favourite things to write poetry about.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Yes nature is always inspiring. Thank you so much. ☺
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