That day

I was sitting with my mother and she said me these exact words.

THAT DAY

"What is the use to yearn for a thing which we cannot attain?" she said,

I was downhearted and speechless,

You cannot have me back mother, but don't you miss me was my heart whispering.

Author's Note

Please don't mention that it needs to be a bit longer because I tried to capture a moment of my life which is so close to my heart.

Reviews

[Surya]

A line or a page but if you described them artistically both works...mostly i prefer short.....by the way it was beautiful sound of aching heart.....to relieve you there is a real conversation stored here by Anindita janhabee named shining conversations, you can read them....

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay. Thank you so much... :)

[wordman]

you`re gone from home and you want her to miss you

[Najam Us Saher]

No...she is gone and I miss her. Thank you so much for reading.

[wordman]

sometimes love hurts

[Jay-LH]

It's perfect length, it does not need to be any longer as it says what is meant to be said. it's great. Love it

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Ashe Conten]

You cannot have me back mother,

This line literally almost made me cry
Great job, I love it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.