Morning star

Rising sun brings a hope

MORNING STAR

She hides her pain really well,

When her happiness turns to sadness you can never tell.

She has seen worse days,

Her life changed, her mind in a state of haze.

She lost all her hope,

Her extreme emotions she couldn't cope,

She was left alone all by herself,

No one knows her, than myself.

She suffered in silence,

There was no one for her guidance,

She was blamed by all,

She blamed herself for her fall.

She was dead inside,

She felt alone to have no one by her side.

She has spent miserable days,

Till today she seeks a perfect place.

Every good thing in her was forgotten,

Even she forgot them,

She started to hate herself,

In her melancholy she was engulfed.

Her smile is lost,

Her heart is still covered in frost,

Her life is messed and shabby,

She just wants to be happy.

She still hopes for the better days,

She hopes she will fit in a perfect place.

She smiles even when her heart is in scars,

Each day she rises up in hope;

For her name means morning star. 

Reviews

[Relic]

Very well done. I enjoyed the rhymes and especially the ending. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for reading this particular poem of mine. The words 'Morning Star' are the literal meaning of my name. ☺

[Relic]

....................Nice!!!!

[SZHZIA]

She is brave and has courage and patience. The poem tell the true picture of people's behaviour with a woman. The poem also reflect the writing of Maulana Rashdul Khairiat, a feminist Indian writer of 20th century. It is a very heart touching and filled with emotion and pain of a respected woman for another woman. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I am happy that my poem reminded you of another poem by a great writer, I feel honoured. Thank you very much.

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome as always...

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entering the real me comp, still judging this weekend, thanks for this amazing poem

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for creating the contest as well as reading this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and description. You gave life and purpose to the morning star. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading, it means a lot :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I loved this poem.

[Geisha]

It reminds of a girl who is suffering from a mental illness and is hiding it away from others... no one understands her, she blames herself for everything wrong, she tries to live life hoping that one day things will get better but who knows... she still have to smile for the world and still coexist with outhes but deep down... the pain is still there.... this reminds me of myself. It's speaks to me... amazing job!!!

[Najam Us Saher]

I would like to tell you this is the only poem which truly represents myself. Every word is true. We have a lot in common I feel, if this was relatable to you. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your life. I respect you.

[Harley Quinn]

Such Beautiful writing. Bravo

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[MOON]

Poignant yet in spite of pain hopeful too.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah but sometimes hope seems a hopeless word too. Thank you so much for reading.

[MOON]

You know the saying. Now that I have given up hope , I feel much better...This too shall pass the feeling of hopelessness

[Najam Us Saher]

That's exactly what I am going through.

[The Exiled Wolf]

She was left alone all by herself,
No one knows her, than myself.
She suffered in silence,
There was no one for her guidance,
She was blamed by all,
She blamed herself for her fall.

These are my favorite lines coz I've gone through the same process. Blaming myself for my failures, but not being able to tell anyone about this because I don't trust them. I kept asking God when will this pain ends - until one day I see what the pain means to a friend and me.

Wandering in darkness makes light more precious - you may not feel it now, but one day you will! The reason for the existence of night, is to glorify dawn - keep your hope, keep going.

[Najam Us Saher]

You have understood that exact meaning I wanted to convey. Thank you so much :)

[MysteriousAries]

sadness overload but never without a hope... Nice poem... Truly each star faded when the sun rise up, but they were just seem to be... Know by heart that they were still there... Swimming at the sea colored sky...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading my poem...I appreciate it :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

AH, the suffering of the spheres! It is good when we can 'identify' and have our troubles eased. This is a wonderful poem to read first thing in the morning. Over here, the Morning Star, has just faded away into the sky as the day lights up.

[Najam Us Saher]

You have correctly deciphered the meaning....Thank you so much for reading I appreciate it. :)