Gifted words

We all have our own way with words.

GIFTED WORDS

When I was suffering,

When I had no one by my side,

When I was silently screaming,

When I just wanted to hide,

I was gifted with words,

With so many thoughts in my mind.

When I wanted to end my life,

When loneliness surrounded me,

When I saw no cure for my strife,

When I didn't want myself to live,

That's when I weaved my feelings into words,

That's when I rose up conquering the floods.

When I had no hope of meeting you,

When I was sure I am no good,

I gathered courage and consoled myself,

I was stronger than before,

Because I had words to express myself.

Reviews

[Valentine]

What is that old saying..."To thine own self be true." When we see ourselves as we really are we can grow from there into a stronger person. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much ☺

[Stacy Purvis]

I believe every single one of us, if we were to be honest, have been there, my dear. What a lovely read. Real. Thank you for sharing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Michael G. Smith]

Words are a powerful thing. They can ca use nations to rise and bring tears to eyes. You've conveyed the strength in this piece.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I agree with your words. ☺

[Michael G. Smith]

You're quite welcome.

[Surya]

Yep, you had something to turn and honorably those are words....Good one, I enjoyed..

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad to know that you enjoyed. Thank you so much ☺

[Zoya]

Yeah you've said it right! Writing down our thoughts and feelings, when no one is by our side, makes us feel lighter, takes a lot of pressure off our shoulders. The rhyming here is great as well. I really liked the poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah I agree with your views. Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

[Zoya]

My pleasure! :)

[It Will Change]

i guess this is every writes story or atleat most of the writers. I like it. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree. Thank you so much. ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree with your write. Turning thoughts into paper in the form of words is like a coping mechanism and therapy for the mind to free itself from the rage inside..

Well expressed emotions here.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much. I am glad to know that this is relatable.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Najam! 😊

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh SO Nice You Turned Your Maan Wali COndition Into Poem And I Think You Are Feeling Alon Want To Talk Him As Sooon As Possible

[Najam Us Saher]

Hahaa mann wali condition into poem 😂 yes I did. Thank you so much. I am truly feeling happy to know that you liked it.

[Sikandar Khan]

Chalo Pta To Chala Ap Ka MAan Q Nehe Kr Rha Tha