Gifted words

We all have our own way with words.

GIFTED WORDS

When I was suffering,

When I had no one by my side,

When I was silently screaming,

When I just wanted to hide,

I was gifted with words,

With so many thoughts in my mind.

When I wanted to end my life,

When loneliness surrounded me,

When I saw no cure for my strife,

When I didn't want myself to live,

That's when I weaved my feelings into words,

That's when I rose up conquering the floods.

When I had no hope of meeting you,

When I was sure I am no good,

I gathered courage and consoled myself,

I was stronger than before,

Because I had words to express myself.

Reviews

[Gooneelkumar Bannenavar]

Unique poem...too good!
Very well expressed..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it. ☺

[SleeplessVolcano]

It is a blessing when our words can become our friends.

Great writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

This made me relate to the words written very much, Nicely done Najam, an other good one :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that it was relatable. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome ^^

[Taz]

This reminds me of myself like right now.

[Najam Us Saher]

Glad to know that you can relate. Thank you so much ☺

[wordman]

hold your head up high,your words will carry you through

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. Thank you so much Sir. ☺

[Biplab Singha]

Really a nice picture of your life you portrayed. Beautiful and real thoughts.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Biplab Singha]

It's so nice!

[Suhd]

It's a Good read really (Y)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I appreciate it ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is awesome, its lovely, powerful and strong poem, one of your best saher, loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. It feels so good to hear that. ☺

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Words are powerful and those who use them for the good are empowered. I always appreciate reading poems that take me on a journey toward a good ending. Thanks for sharing, Sharon

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it ☺

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

You are most welcome. Sharon

[Shasha]

True! It's a beautiful poem. The best line was "When ---- screaming." You can pour out your feelings with words. That you did. Each word expressing itself. Well written and Keep it up!!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I feel widely elated to know that you liked it. ☺

[Shasha]

Oh, it's really nice to read good poems. My pleasure.