Gifted words

We all have our own way with words.

GIFTED WORDS

When I was suffering,

When I had no one by my side,

When I was silently screaming,

When I just wanted to hide,

I was gifted with words,

With so many thoughts in my mind.

When I wanted to end my life,

When loneliness surrounded me,

When I saw no cure for my strife,

When I didn't want myself to live,

That's when I weaved my feelings into words,

That's when I rose up conquering the floods.

When I had no hope of meeting you,

When I was sure I am no good,

I gathered courage and consoled myself,

I was stronger than before,

Because I had words to express myself.

Reviews

[Ryan I]

I liked the positive ending. I liked that you have fight in you. That you realize actions are more powerful than words. Don't ever give up and keep fighting! Well written and beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing!

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for reading, it means a lot to me.

[Ryan I]

It is my pleasure

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your entry. I will refrain from opinion at the moment to be fair to all the entries

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure, thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the struggle leading to logical ending.
"I gathered courage and consoled myself,
I was stronger than before,
Because I had words to express myself."
The above lines. True and worthwhile. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy to hear that you liked this. Thank you very much.

[Darren K. Jackson]

When I didn't think I was good enough?...I get what you are trying to express. One thing I do after I write, I do back weeks later and reread. I even make minor adjustments, if need be, in order to make things make more sense. Sometimes I do this without feedback. Love your writing style. Very talented.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Your words really did meant a lot. I truly thank you. ☺

[AshlynnStyx]

Its a good poem and the flow is clean. The line "when I was sure I am no good" doesn't sound right.

[Najam Us Saher]

I'll think for an alternative. Thank you so much ☺

[CAPOLAVORO]

Words are truly powerful. Thank you for sharing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes.....I thank you so much for reading ☺

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Poetry and letting your words and emotions flow out, does wonders and can wind up making you feel a load better, because it just gets everything off your chest.
And bad feelings or good feelings there all emotions and when you make emotions into words and words into poetry, you make something beautiful.
Well done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much ☺

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your very much welcome :)

[NightMoves]

You have a gift many don't possess. Such creativity and conveying of your thoughts through words as you said. Beautiful work.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words ☺

[zaisham9393]

Excellent Work :)!
Loved it!
Thank you for sharing Najam :)!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling widely elated to know that you liked it. ☺