A blank letter

Expressing feelings

A BLANK LETTER

Sitting opposite to each other,

They sat together,

He held a letter in his hand,

They didn't know where their story would land.

She was eager to read the letter,

She was excited,

To see what that letter held,

He sat there patiently,

Adoring the beauty she beholds.

He gave the letter to her,

And ended her curiosity,

She was shocked to find,

There was nothing she could see.

In a surprise she looked at him,

And he replied, 'That's my life without you'

She was amazed and happy,

Her feelings she couldn't control,

Seeing her happy he was consoled.

'My life is a blank letter without you,

I want to fill the days together,

Whenever you are not around that's how I feel without you,

You are my sunshine in the dark weather.

You are my words, my feelings, 

Oh! Darling you are my poetry.

Whenever I meet you, 

You blind me with your beauty,

And leave me speechless

Creating a cause to leave the letter empty'

She smiled, she shed a tear,

She preserved the letter forever,

She engraved his words in her heart,

She wished they never get apart. 

Reviews

[Valentine]

Very nice idea for this write. Blank letter, how he would feel without her. Good write. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[StateofHope]

The conversation tells a story that anyone can picture and everyone will let the story wander forward (in their mind) and imagine how the relationship will progress, based on their own experiences.
If you have a woman in your life that reacted as in your poem, you are blessed. I know if I offered a women in a relationship with nothing….I would be single, again (I’m attempting to be funny here, cause the letter was blank; I.E. “nothing”)
I can relate to being in love like that. I know I often change words to favorite songs and work in how I love that person or miss things about them. I will also see things in windows or someone else wearing I would think how that might look on her. Albeit clothes, hair cut/look, make up or accessories. Or see tourist advertisements and imagine the fun that can be had if the two of us adventured out.
I really like how the poem is broad in nature so more people can input themselves and a significant other in that moment.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I can understand your state and I do agree with your views. Yes a blank letter can mean 'nothing' too. I would be glad if the boy I love tells me the quoted words.(without reading this poem) It's just my imagination and I am glad you have expressed your views freely. I truly appreciate it. ☺

[Zoya]

Aw this is lovely! A pleasing write yet again.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Zoya]

Most welcome :)

[Giulia King]

"She engraved his words in her heart,
She wished they never get apart."
Beautifully written!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Suhd]

Expressed beautifully...great piece ! (thumbs up)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺ Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.

[Joey Nizz]

Nicely done, thanks for sharing i enjoyed reading this :)

[Najam Us Saher]

That's good to hear. Thank you so much ☺

[Joey Nizz]

your welcome :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Touched my heart, so. Thank you so much for sharing. x

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad to know that you liked it. Thank you so much ☺

[Ardra]

Beautifully done...Thanks for sharing

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you for reading. ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

Ohhh So Romantic Poem Wth Great Idea OF Blan Idea Thats WonderFull............

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes.....Thank you so much I am glad to know that you liked it ☺