A blank letter

Expressing feelings

A BLANK LETTER

Sitting opposite to each other,

They sat together,

He held a letter in his hand,

They didn't know where their story would land.

She was eager to read the letter,

She was excited,

To see what that letter held,

He sat there patiently,

Adoring the beauty she beholds.

He gave the letter to her,

And ended her curiosity,

She was shocked to find,

There was nothing she could see.

In a surprise she looked at him,

And he replied, 'That's my life without you'

She was amazed and happy,

Her feelings she couldn't control,

Seeing her happy he was consoled.

'My life is a blank letter without you,

I want to fill the days together,

Whenever you are not around that's how I feel without you,

You are my sunshine in the dark weather.

You are my words, my feelings, 

Oh! Darling you are my poetry.

Whenever I meet you, 

You blind me with your beauty,

And leave me speechless

Creating a cause to leave the letter empty'

She smiled, she shed a tear,

She preserved the letter forever,

She engraved his words in her heart,

She wished they never get apart. 

Reviews

[Harley Quinn]

This is very heart warming. Beautiful work.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot :)

[Darren K. Jackson]

It just goes to show, actions do truly speak louder than words. Some things we go through it feel in life cannot ever be explained with words. Keep up the great work. God Bless😇

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes actions do speak louder than words. Thank you so much.

[AshlynnStyx]

The fourth line says knew it should say know. The last line doesn't sound right grammatically either. Not a bad poem though.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I'll correct it.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Well, the innocent love has been pretty well defined in this poem... one of the charming creation of yours... has expressed a lot in lesser words... loved it... thanks you for sharing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

[boygene borice]

Wow! this is so beautiful. total romance in words

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your poetry is so meaningful and amazing.
You are very talented for sure.
This piece was so romantic and sweet.
I love the whole storyline to it, what a sweet thing to do for a girl you love, obviously he is deeply in love and she means the world to him.
Its true when in love you kind of do feel empty without that person, and sometimes blank.
I enjoyed this poem allot.
Keep writing always :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I cannot find exact words to express my gratitude. You made me so happy. Thank you so much ☺

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

A simple review doesn't take much time, and its effortless to review such great work, so it was no problem. something so simple for me, made someone else so happy, and i love that

[yuhee]

This poem brought a smile in my face. Very sweet. "My life is a blank letter without you" Love that line.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad that I could bring a smile on your face. ☺

[heartspeaks]

WOAH! This is by far your best writing i've read. It's poetically perfect. Great rhyming , awessom words and feelings describing it are amazing. I loved it to the core. Just one question . Was Kal ho na ho your motivation for writing this? hahaha. Keep up the good work

[Najam Us Saher]

Not really infact I truly like that movie. You made me recall that scene in which he opens that book. Very nice memory, thank you so much for reminding me of that one and also for such a kind comment. I appreciate it ☺

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow extremely beautiful poem. Specially the below lines are perfect.

In a surprise she looked at him,
And he replied, 'That's my life without you'
She was amazed and happy,
Her feelings she couldn't control,
Seeing her happy he was consoled.
'My life is a blank letter without you,
I want to fill the days together,

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kindness. ☺

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome my friend :)

[Ayush Mishra]

Well..this is one of best poem of urs...words are poured in feelings and happiness...good job..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. 😊 You made me happy by saying that.

[Ayush Mishra]

Anytime... Please continue...same way ...