Wise words

WISE WORDS

Rise up, you are stronger than you were yesterday,

Live, like today is your last day,

Be a tide that rises with a fall,

Give hope to yourself and to one and all.

Past gives us experiences to learn,

It is not a time period to dwell,

The one who falls and gets up

Is stronger than the one who never fell.

Mistakes are a tragedy,

Apology remains the remedy,

Guilt never changed the situations,

You revive with every realization.

There are stories which are not meant to be told,

But there are truths which needs to get unfold.

Time is the master for all those things,

Fate do change if in it you believe. 

Reviews

[Valentine]

Some very wise and truthful lines. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺

[matrixmark]

The last line, the last line - what a humdinger of a line. The rest was good and you really do feel the power of the words shining throughout the entire piece. You feel more and more empowered by the words as you read on.

But that last line.....that was spectacular.

Mark.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

[matrixmark]

Keep up the good work.

Mark.

[Gone]

The one who falls and gets up
Is stronger than the one who never fell.
this is so true,. the moral ur trying to pass along is very strong and very relative to those who r going through bad time
(btw, those were myy fav lines from d poem)

[Najam Us Saher]

That was the prompt given. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺ Thank you so much.

[Zoya]

Some great principles human beings must live by told in this poem of yours! A Few words of wisdom. Nice write.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling very happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Zoya]

You're welcome :)

[KT-B]

Love this one, I can totally relate...... - nice work :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it. ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Like that age old quote: 'Our greatest glory is not in 'never' falling but in 'rising' every time we fall'
Nice message portrayed here! That last line is something that I strongly believe in. Well penned 👍

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. I do believe prayer changes fate. Thank you so much. I feel widely elated to know that you liked it. 😀

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes, they do! You're welcome! It was a pleasure reading 😇

[Farhan Shaikh]

Truly described the ability of getting up again, the one who afraid of fall will never fly...well penned encouraging.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Truly very happy to know that you liked it 😊

[Ashe Conten]

Wow... I love it! Great job

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺