Days of happiness

When I see kids playing out

DAYS OF HAPPINESS

As I watch the kids playing out,

I observe and notice the smile on their faces,

I wish they be happy forever,

I wish they stay joyful in every time of their phase.

I wish no sadness touch their lives,

I wish they shine forever.

It is the most beautiful time in one's life one would say,

It's the time of their childhood.

There is something unique about kids which draws my attention towards them,

I hate when they annoy me,

But yet they make me happy from a distance.

I wish they remain happy forever,

I wish I stay happy in my reminiscence.

Reviews

[Minjoph]

It's nice to see some writing focusing on something positive. I've been trying to write more happy things, perhaps this will help inspire me.

I like how you pointed out that they annoy you, but that they still make you happy. I think it adds some... realism, perhaps?

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....it is true. I am glad to know that you could point that out. Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it. ☺

[Dillan Courtright]

I really enjoyed this. I often think about my little cousins growing up. I don't know how to feel about it. Both happy and sad? So sad that so much time has passed, but so happy to have spent it with them.

[Najam Us Saher]

That's good spending time with cousins. Thank you so much for your visit I appreciate it. ☺

[Dillan Courtright]

I'm happy I did :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like kids from a distance too lol but kids are irritating when you get to treat them :p
This was nicely written. Some wishes are sincere enough but not every wish is fulfilled..
I liked reading this :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree. Thank you so much :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! A pleasure :)

[Zoya]

True words! Overall a short and sweet write. Thanks for sharing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad to know that you liked it. :) Thank you so much.

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[Abraham George]

Everyone like to be a kid but i dont like to remember about that. it really make me sad

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay. I can understand Thank you so much... :)

[Abraham George]

i know you will understand , Thats y i didnt complete my lines

[Farhan Shaikh]

Kids are the only living thing who are totally happy, but its a fact soon they gonna face all the difficulties in their life, like we does. Btw its a very good poem and a topic is unique. Loved it anyway

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)
I agree with the fact.

[khalid]

childhood...innocence..no responsibilities..no duties..
very nice image of childhood..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes.....I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much ☺

[JT Godin]

I hate children, but I like this poem. Has somewhat of a Victorian feel to it. Or maybe reminiscent of the style of Herrick.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it. ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

Ohhh Childhooor Memories Wasay Ham Sb jb Chotay Hora Ha ro sochrau ha Jaldi Say Bray Hojae Aur Jb Bray Hogae to ye Sochtay Ha Kaash Chotay He Rethay

[Najam Us Saher]

Haan sahi hai....mein bhi wahi sonchi thi. Thank you ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

welcome Tmnay sonchna kab shuru krdia tm sochti b ho aj pta chala

[Najam Us Saher]

Bohot sonchi hu...kitna shyad tum sonch bhi nahi sakte utna....

[Sikandar Khan]

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[Najam Us Saher]

Ho sakta hai kyunki wikipedia aur google par kaam ki info milti hai lol. 😁
Bura mat manna bas aise hi sata rahi hu tumhe.

[Sikandar Khan]

meray pas kam kay ilawa har info milti ha mujhay staaogi to apnay apko he sata logi

[Najam Us Saher]

Acha........

[Sikandar Khan]

g....................