My dearest father

I love my father more than anyone else.

MY DEAREST FATHER 

I have written several things for my mother,

I equally admire and love you more than her father.

I am not afraid to unveil my past,

Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.

I had no mother since years,

She left me and I was in tears.

You were the one who took care of me father,

You turned all my tears to laughter.

Every night I woke you up,

But you never said anything to me.

Every day I created fuss,

But you bared all my tantrums with ease.

No one can take that place you have in my heart.

I have loved you since the very start.

I cannot imagine being away from you,

I have not loved anyone else more than you.

I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,

You were my mother too,

You took care of me like she would do.

But she was not with me,

You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.

I always want to see you happy,

No one can ever do what you have done for me,

You are the best in the world,

You are best in whole history.

I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,

I am in tears father,

I cannot imagine losing you.

Reviews

[Ashe Conten]

I have a very strong relationship with my father, so I quickly connected with this one. Good job!

[Najam Us Saher]

That's good to hear. Thank you so much I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Anjali]

Wow..... It is filled with strong feelings and emotions, it's amazing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am very happy to know that you liked it.

[Abraham George]

you father is so lucky to have you as a precious pearl. this poem is your emotions and feeling and its good

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you so much. I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it. Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry dear Najam.
"You are the best in the world,
You are best in whole history.
I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,
I am in tears father,
I cannot imagine losing you"
The above lines. Perfect appreciation of love and very kind words. I truly liked this poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I hope you allow your father to read.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am truly very happy to know that you liked it. I really thank you from bottom my heart. I cannot show this to my father I feel that he will be very emotional thinkng about my mom and I don't want this. I hope you understand.

[Coyote Poetry]

I was raised by Grandparent. I told them often. They were important to me. I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.

[Valentine]

Good write, those of us who are fortunate enough to be raised by both mother and dad need to be much more grateful. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right a child is very lucky if they are raised by both. Thank you so much.

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute to your father,may he stand tall in your heart forever

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. Thank you so much sir I am glad to know that you liked it.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Farhan Shaikh]

Father is the real hero of every child...such an emotional piece of work saher..well penned .

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Widely elated to know that you liked it.

[Surya]

Father, dad.....such a great person....
Truly I admire you, you put down your feelings here very emotionally.......bless your father live a long life seeing you happy.....:)..that's what every dad wants rite...
Thank you for sharing such an emotional write....hope your father would be happy after seeing this..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kindest words. They are so comforting.

[Sikandar Khan]

Brilliant Work SAher..Hatts Off To You..Described Your Emotional Journey....Your Pain....Your Love For Your PArents...Both Are Equal...Inspriation To Single Parents.......

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I was literally in tears while writing this.