My dearest father

I love my father more than anyone else.

MY DEAREST FATHER 

I have written several things for my mother,

I equally admire and love you more than her father.

I am not afraid to unveil my past,

Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.

I had no mother since years,

She left me and I was in tears.

You were the one who took care of me father,

You turned all my tears to laughter.

Every night I woke you up,

But you never said anything to me.

Every day I created fuss,

But you bared all my tantrums with ease.

No one can take that place you have in my heart.

I have loved you since the very start.

I cannot imagine being away from you,

I have not loved anyone else more than you.

I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,

You were my mother too,

You took care of me like she would do.

But she was not with me,

You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.

I always want to see you happy,

No one can ever do what you have done for me,

You are the best in the world,

You are best in whole history.

I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,

I am in tears father,

I cannot imagine losing you.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

that is cute enough and such a direct feeling it is....i felt reality,simply beautiful

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it.

[Mr.Writer]

I am thankful for having both of my parents with me! I cannot even imagine the pain without one of them! :(
Thank you so much for bringing me to tears...
Great job! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading.I am glad to know that you liked it.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh dear. This made me want to cry. I miss my dad. Thank you so much for sharing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Asmae]

wow, a very well written masterpiece!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am widely elated to know that you liked it ☺

[KubiAmine]

I can't truly fathom what it is really like to lose someone so dear to my heart, because I haven't experienced that, thank God, but I can only imagine what it must feel like to live without them. Your poem is a reminder of how great of a father someone can be to his children, and which makes it a daunting nightmare for us to imagine their loss.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are correct. Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate it.

[MsJewel]

Your words are soft, sincere and heartfelt. Beautiful writing. :) Julie

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it and I am feeling truly happy from within to know that you liked it.

[khalid]

this can easily touch the heart and gets tears out of the eyes..loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you so much. Feeling widely elated to know that you liked it.

[Diamond]

Very very beautiful...being a daddy's girl, it gave me a special feeling as I read on. Lovely!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I am feeling truly happy to know that you can relate with it.

[Gone]

I could feel your emotions through your writing...
This was beautiful

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it and I am truly happy to know that you liked it.

[Artisthub]

So beautiful.....
Writing from your heart....

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I am glad to know that you liked it.